Please let me know what i can do to make this design better! I appreciate any and all comments :)

What about a pi shaped apple with a stem and leaf?

I agree with the other comment. I think that would convey your idea a lot better.

I would move the apple up a bit and flatten the bottom some

Cool idea, but it's not coming through in this design. The little pi symbol is thrown on as an afterthought. TCarver's suggestion could be pretty cool! A pi symbol that was colored and designed like an apple would be pretty funny! The other way to go could be to scratch the apple and instead have an apple pie with pi-shaped heat waves rising off it. An apple in the shape of the pi symbol sounds really cool, though! I'd give it a try!

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My suggestion: Make pi bigger and blur the edge to make it more high-light-ish ...

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I think if you change the design to be a pi shaped apple you should still keep the steam. They help the design a lot conceptually.

I really like the idea of making the apple into the pi shape.

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I agree with the first commenter. Also, maybe work on trying to make it look less two dimensional. Let's see where the pi shaped apple goes first. :) MURDER

I think the steam trails need to go, and there should be more emphasis on the pi.

This may be too particular but I think you could change the shape/color of the glare. The pure white seems very exaggerated and it sticks out a lot. It also looked like the symbol for pi. Try distorting the shape.

Loved the idea, but I agree with the comments above. try a lighter T color and also maybe a smaller size. Detail the symbole a little more.

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Just an idea, but what about adding some sort of pie tin at the bottom of the apple?

The "pi" symbol kind of looks like an anvil. I do like the idea of taking the pi symbol and coloring it like an apple, that'll be much more subtle and clever. Keep up the good work though.

I like the idea of a pi shaped apple. Perhaps the symbol could be made up of several pies.

the apple may be a bit large and run off of the front of the shirt, maybe make the apple a little smaller

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nice idea.. i would suggest you could try apple bitten in shape of pie... :)


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I think you have a great concept and good start. I agree with the above comments on the pie and pi. There's potential here! Looking forward to see the next version.
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The pi doesn't really convey an apple. The stem and leaf alone don't do it for me. If I didn't already know this was called 'Apple Pi' I would think that it was a Chinese letter or something of that nature.

The plate could use more detail too. Maybe have a bunch of apples and line them up to make the pi symbol?

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this is a good start for an idea that benefits from simplicity. Still, the plate could be converted into a pie pan like these ones. and you might immediately get a stronger recognition.

Regarding the shape of your apple: It does currently look more like a Chinese gate than an apple and i wonder if you could approach this to be more like the cornflake that was shaped like the state of Illinois (you can find this with a google search for "cornflake shaped like Illinois") so that your shape both resembles the apple more closely AND the sign for Pi?

I guess this is an argument for something that is between the subtlety of your first design and the explicit Pi shape of your apple in this one.

what about making the color of your apple more varied? You could, rather than using a single, flat red, introduce a gradient that allows a transition of color across your apple (maybe from one red to another, maybe a richer red around the stem, maybe from a deep red to a red that is softened by yellow). Some images of apples here.