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v1 Rebetiko , 108 days ago, click to expand
v2 Rebetiko , 105 days ago, click to expand
v3 Rebetiko , current version








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Version 1 - 108 days ago
Version 2 - 105 days ago
Version 3 - 104 days ago

GraceyN
GraceyN on Feb 12 '12
This is v3 with some shades / highlights. Please tell me what you think!
MTT9
MTT9 on Feb 12 '12
Maybe some texture would help...
WhiskeyDrinker
WhiskeyDrinker on Feb 13 '12
I'd spend some time looking closely at the shapes that make up the figure. Right now it looks like you've just applied a quick Photoshop filter to an image. The leg underneath is hard to define. A background would help give it some more depth too.

Also, his face doesn't look very human , I'd put some more work in there to give him a decent expression. Is the text part of the design? If so I don't think the font you've chosen compliments the design.

Finally, I have no idea what this design is about, I'm assuming Rebetiko is a famous musician? Having said this I don't think this design would appeal to a wide market.
coryduran
coryduran on Feb 14 '12
I like this version more than the original, but I'd also like to see things defined more still, like whiskey drinker said. I think the art is reminiscent of the art you see in fable on the political posters or in some 1984 inspired art of big brother, so I can see potential in this, just think it needs some more work.

Could you look at mine?
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didyousayAbeLincoln
didyousayAbeLincoln on Feb 21 '12
wow, this is cool. I like the colors, but I agree- maybe a little more definition like with the legs.
JLK
JLK on Feb 21 '12
I like everything about this, the color, the graphic. For what it's worth, I prefer the "larger than life" placement of the graphic version 1. Hope that helps.
If you have time, would you help me out by scoring my submission in the running? Thanks so much!
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