design inspired by Doctor who ep "Blink" .. rnrnWhat do you think guys?

cool...
]submit it, and give me link i'll vote it
mine please
hoping hand

your link is broken btw... :)

Cool, but the white border in bottom of the angel is a problem for me.... Test to erase that for see :-)

I think you need to add something to make it a bit more obvious that its about dr who. still, nice design!

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Don't mess with the chickens

as suggested by "MonsieurQuidam" remove the white border on the bottom of the angel.. to test how it looks...

nice concept,
:)

but maybe you need work for the font.

any suggestion on the font?

I can't suggest a specific font, but I think it needs to be changed. It looks like a horror movie gothika type of font, with an serene calm angelic statue it just doesn't seem to work together. I like the art though and the idea, just find a better font for the type.

Can you check out my design?
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I think you should work on the font a bit.
Try to fit the emotion of the design more.

When you have a moment, please vote for my design:
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A little more work on the font would be great.

If you have time, tell me what you think

http://www.threadless.com/critique/99581/Rebetiko

you corrected the lower border, good job!

I Have a design up for voting, please check it out!Don't mess with the chickens

Change the font..... and i kinda wanted it to be scary .. so what do you think guys? (btw the design is inspired from the Dr. Who show)

i like the changes you made... not that the original wasnt good, but this has more style with the new font. good choice.... specially with the white specs around. only thing that bugs me is the "t"...maybe a bit too far away? unless the was intentional.

yeah your right... i'll change it.. thanks

Move the letter "T" closer a bit...

I like it, maybe make it fade into the shirt more so that its a smooth transition.

I think either the text or the angel should be large. Now both are large. You can also remove some space between the words.

I like it. You can try it with fading, but I think its fine.

so i tried this version.. which one is better? version 4 or 5?

I think the angel needs a little bit of white highlighting. Right now my eyes are drawn right to the white text. I see that you have a definite light source, thats good. So maybe some white on her left wing, arm, and dress. Just a little though. I know the "Don't Blink" is the whole point of the shirt, but would it be possible to get the point across without using text? I say that because Threadless RARELY puts text on shirts like this. Try making v6 without text, lets see how it looks? Otherwise I think it's great.

I have to agree with JordanLBender here, the text isn't so related ti the rest of the design...

as suggested i remove the words. but can you guys tell that the angel is from the show "Dr. who'? ... anyway what do you guys think.. i can't decide which color i should go for.

Hi, thanks for rating my design, as for your, I think it looks better on grey and i think it would be helpfull if you could sharpen the lines, but very good concept, you are almost there

Hey, Thanks for your nice comments on my design, it is now up for scoring. Please if you have time help me out by scoring it at: Bread Jump Score

i thk dark grey looked fine


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Wow, powerful graphic. I like it. This version is best, without the words. Not sure about Dr.Who (I always said I need to watch more TV) but I think the graphic stands strong on its own.
If you have time, would you help me out by scoring my submission in the running? Thanks so much!

Nice, but it seems that the design is kinda blurry. Maybe adjust the presentation to show the full design and then put the mockup in the corner

Ok how bout this text in the back of the tee?

Awesome! SUBMIT THIS!

Its better in the front, with the first font! And with grey color not white! Make it little bit hard to read!
But, its just me!

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