I hope you guys enjoy this design and have some sort of feedback on it, I've worked very hard with not a lot of good programs to work on, but I'm confident I did well.

The salt could look better if it made a circle around the slug rather than a square. I think the salt grains should be much smaller. Now they look more like small eggs. Might be just me, but I don't really get what "doe 21 2012" means. is it just a reference to the predicted end of the world date? Don't think this picture really needs it. The placement on the shirt is a bit funny. I would move the picture to the center

The idea is funny, but I don't think the card with the December 21 reference is necessary. Give some more texture to the slugs body, especially the head/face area.

Maybe give the slug some more detail. Also like nalle said try putting the salt into a circular form. Plus try to mix up the salt abit. Not all salt is a circle :)

Thanks guys! :)

Thans for your feedback. I agree with the other comments. I don't think the design needs the sign, also work on the salt, maybe you don't need to do each salt grain, but work with white background and grey or black dots. The T color looks better on green for me.

I like the green tshirt as well. I agree with adding some more texture to the body etc, but I actually like the placement on the shirt it makes it more interesting than simply placing it in the middle.

Please comment on my design if you get a chance. Thanks

http://www.threadless.com/critique/99652/Faith_in_Music

I'd agree that it doesn't need the sign and that the text of the salt surrounding the slug could be worked on a bit. I really like the design though.

Could you give mine a look?
Keep Reaching

I thought the sign kinda added to the meaning of the title though? Slugpocalypse? I don't know maybe its not as humerous as i presumed it'd be taken.

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Thanks for comment in my design.
add texture and highlights.

Thanks for commenting on my design, based on your comments i have made some changes to my design, would you mind checking them out and give me your new opinion, Thank you for your time:
Bread Jump

Hey, Thanks for your nice comments on my design, it is now up for scoring. Please if you have time help me out by scoring it at: Bread Jump Score

Great concept. A fresh take on the whole 2012 thing.
If you have time, would you help me out by scoring my submission in the running? Thanks so much!

awesome....