This is another design that I love the concept, but think that there could be more done to it. I just don't know what!?! I look forward and appreciate any comments and suggestions that I receive! Thank you.

With this revision I attempted to use suggestions that I previously received, making a better use of the active space on the tee. I look forward to reading your comments and suggestions.

I like the design maybe work on the typography, but it is almost done.

Please if you have time, check out my design, i appretiate your opinion: Bread Jump