Threadless

v1 we are the robots, current version








Work in progress by:
The Results
Submit This!
1
Needs Work
7
Dont Submit!
5

machine413
machine413 on Nov 17 '07
i hope everyone likes robots
horizontal vertigo
horizontal vertigo on Nov 17 '07
i dunno, it just feels like somethings missing...

can't put my finger on it...
horizontal vertigo
horizontal vertigo on Nov 17 '07
needs work sounds rather cold doesn't it
machine413
machine413 on Nov 17 '07
no i agree, the bubbles are more of a placeholder before i make a more iteresting pattern but the robots are also missing something, maybe some more detail i dont know
maxmaroe
maxmaroe on Nov 17 '07
It looks like those things from the Matrix
mtths
   mtths on Nov 17 '07
yeah, the one they insert in the belly button!



but it's gonna be better if the one in the back has more detail,

the title says, WE, so try to show more of them....

(and not just by copy/paste/mirror them)
knuckleheads
knuckleheads on Nov 17 '07
A fish-eye reflection of ....???.... in the robot's dome?
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Nov 18 '07
make a second robot that's different from the first one. like, totally different shape. I do kinda like the aquatic feel of this, so maybe a cool underwater cyber-species theme is in order. or, they could be nano-bots in a blood stream.
3 days later
againstbound
   againstbound on Nov 21 '07
The main illustraion is really good, but i think the rest doesnt quite fit(the spots and the robots reflection). Mybe just leave the robot and add some sort of background to it, but notso full that it takes prominence from the robot.
missKMC13
missKMC13 on Nov 21 '07
it kind of looks like the robot is touching/looking at its reflection...if thats the case then maybe something like a mirror to let us know hes looking at that?

and i think it would look better if the bubbles werent so perfectly round...make then more oval and hardened at the edges, to match with the robot, maybe?
Mesenchyme
Mesenchyme on Nov 21 '07
I think it's a nice, clean illustration, but maybe needs a catch or some sort?
You must be logged in to leave a comment.