1st submission, critique away... ;)

did the record player eat the dog's head? why does he have no head?

too "political cartoony", what with the RIAA logo. Also, it looks like the dog's head was cleanly severed by a bunch of bubbles, or perhaps the gramophone is in self-cleaning mode. You could do a good piece about loud music, but make it look like the dog's head was blasted off, not surgically removed.

Ok I've changed it around a bit and added text...

I like it!

looks good but, lose the text

funny how you've used the hmv logo :-)

mtths: I think that's the point. it's a parody of the old RCA Victor ad, where the point is that the recording is so clear the the dog hears "his master's voice".

Here is without the text and bigger illustration. the pink soundwaves could be stitched

Fab design - love it!

oh poor doggie! x

Given its resemblance to the RCA logo, yes, it's undoubtedly a copyright issue, unless you can make a case for parody. Of course, you can only make such a case AFTER they sue you. Still, I agree, it's hilarious, and really well designed.