I accidentally refreshed about a zillion times, so started a new one. Please keep the good feedback coming!

better! maybe a throw pillow to match? or her cup could be red?

also the chair needs more...something. It looks too flat or plain or....something.

i just like her. minus the couch and the random star things... KISS...

she's cute. I like the pattern on her shoes. I would try a different pattern on the couch instead of gradients, like maybe dots or something curvy.

did somebody say matches?



oh. oh alright. i see how it is.

the steam is a little confusing. it looks like part of her head at first. i also agree about the gradients on the couch. the swirls also look weird. define her hands and the thing on her lap more. finally, the stripe of couch with the flower pattern needs something to differentiante it from the background, or else it looks see thru or something.



i like where this is going. keep working on it.

Please keep the great feedback coming boys and girls!

it's coming along great. i think that the outline of the couch needs to be thicker, or neater... but i like how this is progressing.



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oooo, this is my favorite version so far! Maybe a shadow for the chair to show a ground point?

You guys have been awesome! Thanks everybody!



Check out my other submission too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/9627/Don_t_Shoot_the_Fakenger

please submit this! its so frikin cute

Just been cleaning up the background flowers, as well as the couch/shadow a little.



Glad you like it!

it kinda bugs me how the mug she's holding is the same width as her face...so maybe either make her face bigger or the mug bigger. otherwise i like it. do you have any other colors besides red?

I'm obsessing with the lines now, I hope you guys still like it!

Still obsessing!

why on earth did you take the pattern off the shoes? that was the best part!!!



ok i really like this and desperately want it to be great....so i'm going to be nitpicky.



the shadow is weird. it wouldn't cast a round shadow.



i don't like the swirl on the chair arms.



the steam looks weird too. maybe just take it out?



what is on her lap?



red looks a million times better than the other colors btw.

I missed that out! It's back in now. It's a cat on her lap, but facing the other way.



Red and the neutral colours work best I think. I'll have a new version up soon.

That white of the chair is the most dominant part of the picture and doesn't go very well with any of the shirt colors, try making it a different tone of the shirt color you are choosing.

lol. the shadow would not look like that either.

You know, I prefer the oval lots better. It's simple, indicates a keylight from the top (like the other shadows) and goes better with the rest of the design.

I agree with your comment on the new shadow, kahpow. Your shadow is covering up your petals/flowers in either case. I'd perhaps offer the shadow color up to people as a slightly darker color than the tee it's printed on - it would be a good way to work with your canvas (i.e. its current color on the red tee, black on the charcoal gray tee, and light gray on the white tee). I like your earlier version of the steam coming from the cup. It lost it's steam look and now looks a little too much like that gray lock of hair, but rising up from her head.

you could leave the shadow's shape as is, just remove the lines & let the flowers flow over it. But you might want to chnage the shadow's color to fit whatever shirt color you go with. The red looks good on the red tee, but not so good on the other 2. Also, try different placements, maybe centered and a little bigger? maybe add more flowers...even on to the back?

hmm. I like the first one XD

I think this is an awesome design and would definitely buy a t-shirt with this on

you should probably sub it. i like the red the best. though blue is a close second. i just like how the mug matches too on the red. still can't tell thats a cat without knowing.

Ahhh - didn't notice she had a cat on her lap! I love this design - would definitely buy it.

Since it's the new year, I thought this was worth a revisit - tell me what you guys think!

No one likes the new cat?

Cute.

sweet as. love it on the red.

I think it's hard to make out the girl and the cat as seperate things.

yea maybe no cat.. sorry fluffy

The cat is non-negotiable. How the cat looks is, but its presence was a key part of the design.