Well after working on this way too long I think it\'s almost ready. Still need to make a boy character who will probably be in the crows nest looking through a parascope. Any other suggestions are appreciated, thanks =)

bump. comments anyone? please.

Oh wow!! I love this! I really don't think you need to change anything.... The only thing, maybe, is the bottom of the boat (or ground, not sure) looks a little too solid, maybe add more curls to it like the clouds.....maybe.

It's really beautiful :) Show it on a shirt.

thanks. I'll show it on the shirt in the next revision=)

this is just PERFECT :O

I think that its great.. really.. I want to buy it:)

thanks. for some reason the texture on the clouds got messed up and it looks like one section has a darker texture than the rest...not sure why that happened.

i really like this incredibly a lot. what's the placement on a shirt though?

why thank you =)

placement will probably be the middle chest area. i'll show it on the next revision with a couple different options.

this is great!

New version on the "natural" color from the Threadless templates... which looks white to me, but thought I've give it a try. Still need to add a boy with a parascope and captains hat. Anyone think anything else needs work?

anyone think the right cloud needs thicker lines to match the other 2 clouds?

bump.

Khaki!

I think i'd like to see a couple of "characters" on this wind ship, to add a little more personality to it, they don' have to be people but something with faces and limbs (someone's gotta steer the ship!)



I like the style!

thanks! I'm working on some characters right now.



I was thinking of maybe adding a big monster at the bottom of the design reaching towards the ship...any thoughts on that anyone?

With a captain now!



I think I'm going to stick a bird in there somewhere, maybe on top of the steering wheel...anyone think that would be cool?

I think I'm happy with it, but would really like some input from ya'll, thanks.

It reminds me a bit of "stardust".



I cannot give you much critique, it's looking good so far and you have kept the used style in the whole image, this is great.



At least I prefer an upper placement on the shirt...

thank you.



anyone else? even if you just say "I like it" or "it sucks donkey turds" it'd be nice to hear what people think.

very nice work. Not my personal style but very nicely done

thanks =)

oh wow!! these changes are great! I love the captain & the bird - submit!!!!

thanks nikolina.



i think the bird kinda looked cleaner than the rest of the drawing since i did it all in vectors, anyone think it looks out of place at all?

*looks*

the bird is fine, the design looks ready :D

If anything it looks like the birds outline is a little thinner than everything else, maybe. But this is really beautiful. I love the shirt color.

the bird reminds me of the caracter on the viking bird shirt.

http://www.threadless.com/product/1016/Viking_Bird



it could lead to itchy issues of plagiarism and stuff.



the ship is neatly done but it looks like it's floating in nothingness, maybe i'm trying to say that there's too much emptiness around there.



i love the tree and clouds.

please post a zoomed in pic of the dude up there.

pirate birds seem the rage nowadays... I'll prob have to remove tmine from my wip. I would have preferred the ship to be more streamlined, but pretty nice work.

It's looking really nice. I would like to see a close up of the pirate.

wtf luc415. why would you change your avatar picture? you had the best one on the whole friggin site and you changed it?

change it back. or send it to me so i can use it. i demand it!

does everyone understand that the ship is actually a plot of land? I hope it's not confusing...

Nice work.

so it's a plot of land. it all makes sense now.

luff it.

i would like it bigger

i didn't read all the comments so i don't know if someone already said this, but its often looked down upon to copy and paste, like your clouds. in this case its actually not very noticable. but something to consider.

Pretty cool, man.

ooohh.. perdy!

submit now! dude!

thx everyone for the input.



Lajlaj you kinda caught me...I used the same drawing for the two right clouds, but changed the outline up in illustrator and hand drew the texture seperately. I was hoping it was enough work to look like it wasn't copy pasted, but maybe not it seems.

I think your image with two ships and a bird is a stronger design than the ship by itself... It gives it some depth, like there may be a whole fleet of air ships...



Nice work, though! I like the style and color.

i think you're right, good point thanks!

i prefer the center placement better

i love this one, the bird with the eyepatch is awesome. i'm not too crazy about the shirt color but i can't think of what color i would like to see this on. you have great illustration skills, i'd buy!

hey thanks for the kind words. this one got subbed tuesday so it should be up pretty soon.

You're going to be making quite a name for yourself. Great first and second designs, I'll be looking for this when it goes up.

dude thanks for the nice compliment =)

just wanted to advertise that this one's up for voting now...



http://www.threadless.com/submission/141792/On_Windy_Days



thanks for all the help folks =)