PLEASE COMMENT ITS MY LAST SUB BEFORE IM GOING TO THE ARMY FOR 3 YEARS! SO I REALLY NEED THIS

hey lilmaui!thought you are already in the army....i think the lighter on the left was better before...bummer...you have deleted

the former vīs....or is it a resub?2 things that i donīt like that much(from only mah personal taste): the color of the left lighter,doesnīt match the rest of the color work that nicely,or maybe try to suit the grey/even darker grey - lighter better to it....and the other thing is with the arms of the match,i think i would like it better if both of them would be rectangular or "soft",just looks a bit strange to me that they look that different from each other right now....anyway funny idea and nice executed....hope you have still a bit of time left for this though....

better?

iīd say yes...better than before....(the match dude)

but maybe you could try out other colors ,too...?(the lighters dudes)

yep better. i'm trying to think of advice but can't really come up with anything good. the shadow on the big lighter isn't connected to it's body, theres that space in between showing the shirt color and i'm not sure if that was on purpose.

now?

up please

looks much better, love the new orange and the jerseys. i'm drawing blanks on changes though sorry...

maybe numbers on the jerseays? not totally necessary but might be nice.

thanks

any more comments?

up

SO I CAN SEND!?

yep.do it,do it....turned out well