this one is dedicated to this very special dude out there who really needs to get a design done..

i was just worried about that you might got stuck with the JackBro ....IT´S FULL ON FLAMES `N SNAKES `N NIPPLES AND STUFF,

HOPE YA LIKE IT,BRO!

haha!

it needs lightning

ea....i´m workin on it.....i´m on to refine the whole thing a little bit.....especially the flames....maybe i´ll try to use some gradients,not sure about this....but there will be different colors for the tee in the v2 any way,sand and maybe others....and maybe i should dress the other girl,too,....



but any other suggestions are appreciated...cheers!

It looks like the girl on the left has a really strange tan-line on her butt. I know it's a highlight, but it looks strange in that particular place.



Both of their faces also look a little "off."

Oh, and what's with the A's on the cards? They're clearly not aces.

lol

yea the cards might be changed as well...maybe i place a high street or a flush in there instead....or i try to make the `a `more interesting....think you´re right with the highlights...there´s still lots of work in there.....but cheeers for the suggestion...

needs an 8 ball

HELL YEA!CHEERS MATE!

Very well vectored, just I'm not sure that it's the style that will get made at threadless.

Hot stuff. but work on the faces. the center girl looks like she's in pain

ya but i don´t care if it gets printed at least.....i made this for dick firestorm because he encouraged me to get my ass up again...and i´ll try to improve this a bit.......

cheers biobot!.......wait for the v2....

well, it's very good and someone is probably going to make it, even if it doesn't get done here. The faces do need some work though.

I like muscle cars, dice, cards and all but I don't think I like the facial expressions on the 2 girls. Good effort though keep at it.

Is the girl in the front sporting a bulge?

i can't wait until he sees this. it's gunna be an awesomesplosion.

KICK FUCKIN' ASS! THIS IS WHAT I'M TALKIN' ABOUT, BROS!!!!! HERSHEL, YOU NAILED THIS MUTHA FUCKA AND EVEN MANAGED TO MAKE IT CLASSY! THE CARDS AND THE DICE LOOK PRETTY FUCKIN' SOLID! SUBMIT THIS, BRO! I'M STILL WORKIN' WITH JACK ON MINE. THREADLESS IS ABOUT TO GET SCORTCH'D WITH DEMAND FOR MORE DESIGNS LIKE THIS!

TOTALLY MADE MY DAY, BRO!

HAHHHA

i'm gonna wear this as i'm doing donuts on your front lawn with a bottle of jack in one hand and a filterless cigarette in the other, blasting kill em all out of my shitty blown speakers.

rofl

WHEN YOU SUBBING THIS, BRO?

OH YEAH - THIS IS BALLS

DUDE I´M WORKIN ON IT....CAUSE I DON`T WANNA HAVE THIS DROPPED OUT MUCH TOO EARLY...I´M FUCKIN GLAD THAT I MADE YOUR DAY,YOU `VE MADE MINE ,TOO,BRO!

TRUST ME,IT`S GOIN TO BE RAD,GIMME SOME TIME.....

(if i had just one customer like the firestorm in real life i´d be such a happy man!)

Gorgeous !!

this is hilarious. i wish it was simulated process so it looked like those nasty nascar shirts from the 80s



well done

HERSHEL BRO, I LIKE HOW THE CHICKS LOOK ALL GREASED UP. THIS IS GONNA GET PRINTED!

...picked up some good advice from the comments....thanks guys...still workin on it..I´M GLAD YOU DIG THE GREASE,BRO!!

Hah, awesome.

I think maybe the snake tongue could stand out from the cards more? Bigger drop shadow or something? I dunno, I could be wrong but it wasn't immediately evident to me.

Woah it looks like she's packin' something! Downstairs that is! The bulge on our right...? Something I'm missing here perhaps...

Wow....that's pretty hardcore man!

aw..ya...it´s supposed to be her left foot,´cause she´s on her knees...but looks odd,yeah-----hmmm



this one already fucked me up in the v1:



*professorE on Nov 10 '07

Is the girl in the front sporting a bulge?*



that´s why there are more cars now...but now i think i see what he really meant....thanks dude!

the snake looks a little flat against the girls leg. and compared to the amount of work you did on her top her shorts seem lacking

FUCKIN' MINT, BRO!

Dick I thought this was your design!! it is pretty kick ass!!

thanks edword,cheers dick!ya i´d say it´s a kinda collaboration with the firestorm....source of inspiration for this one....v3 is on it´s way in the next couple of days.....and if this is goin to be succesful,which i doubt for several reasons but i´ll give it a shot,i won´t forget tha BRO,FUCKIN FIRESTORM...and i´d love to look forward to do more stuff like this cause i love solid shit and *THREADLESS IS ABOUT TO GET SCORTCH'D WITH DEMAND FOR MORE DESIGNS LIKE THIS!*

that's super nice. You made a lot of changes from V1 but it's a huge improvement. and agree, invert the bulge.

One point though, don't know if it was said in V1 but you have an eight ball, and the die add up to 8? should they be double 1's snake eyes...i don't know if the numbers have a significance..but cool nonetheless. nice work.

thanks past tense!



*..you have an eight ball, and the die add up to 8?should they be double 1's snake eyes...*...i´m not sure what that means but sounds cool so i´ll try to pick this up on the next v..cheers dude

(english is my 2nd language)

i wouldn't have known...

sub it for the revolution!

I think girl's head it's a bit small... I know it's about perpective but I think it's smallest than it should be :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/13279/Harakiri

i think this is perfect, just curve in the line on the inside of her shorts like the other side to get rid of that bulge and i think it'll be perfect!

there is also another version with n orange/black snake and other

shirt colours,but man even my png´s and jpegs get too big for this here......but as soon as i figure out how to make it happen i´ll show it to you bro...

YEAH it´s gettin closer and closer.....where do you get all those models for the presentation?in the sub kit are only a few ones....i´m still workin on it.....

This is pretty sweet. I would change the color of the dice tho, black I was thinking

Coming soon to theaters near you. . . HELL YEA!SOLIDSHITWITHFLAMES!!!



hershel IS . . . : DICK FIRESTORM!



rated X for XTREME INSANITY!!!



PREPARE TO GET SCORCHED!!!

color in the dots on the dice, seriously AWESOMAZING.

haha...no olie i´m not dick firestorm,seriously....i just love his kick ass attitude and would love to have some good ol´blue pabst ribbon´s with him while wearin this shirt....and i´m lookin forward to participate in the first " threadless loves firestorm" competition,if it´s ever happening....so pick up your pencils,drawing board or whatever and HEAT UP THIS PLACE....i know you can....



to the design: thanks very much for all your comments,i really appreciate it....yeah the idea with the dices might be nice,think i´ll have a try with other colors before i submit....you can click on the bar on the right side for other tee colors by the way...i prefer the brown one,but purple also looks flashy somehow...

I'd never wear it, but the work you put into the design must have taken a while. I can see it selling. Good luck!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/16090/Instant_Zen

changed only the dices...looks better in black,thx for suggestions everyone...think this is goin to be the version i´ll sub.....

Sweeeeeeet!

my only gripe is that rattlesnake(?) has the coloration of a king snake, which is completely non venomous. it's the coral snake that is deadly ("red and black, friend of jack; red and yellow, kill a fellow"). If you want the snake to be a rattler, give it a cool diamondback pattern. otherwise the head doesn't match the coloration (coral and king's don't have big front fangs).

foooookin hell i completely failed in biology and stuff......bio-bot bro,that´s like the most valuable comment ever,even clickable,it lets me even look more like an idiot....thanks man!the reason why i messed it up is because i´ve started with another snake and then decided to change colours during the process....but yeah you´re right,doesn´t fit the head now....just wanted to have some more colourful instead of the brown and only had a blurred memory of that king snake(couldn´t even remember the name,so thanks again,man!)....but the best thing finally is that pic of the coral snake....yeeah that one could fit into the design perfectly!!!i hope that its head is not so much different from the rattlesnake´s head,cause it def.has to have some big fangs,gotta do some better research....i´m glad you had your eye on it cause i was just about to sub this.....i´ll fix that

CHEERS BRO!

If you sub this into the badass contest, I am 100% convinced that it will win. Unless you are already a judge for it.

The snake is possibly a little too flat where it wraps her torso, but other than that your design is killer.

olie: nah i´m not....i´m used to sit on the opposite corner of the court...usually....but yeah badass might be interesting!...gotta watch some snake documentary now,...excuse me....

Ha this reminds me of Queens of the Stone Age - go with the flow.

Awesome, sub it!

Awesome! submit it! Personally, I wouldn't wear it but I would still 5 it! Great concept and expertally executed!

yeah.......no.

..fixed the pattern and this is a rattlesnake 100% now....thanks to everyone who helped me a bit with this one,i really appreciate it ´cause it def. made me become a little bit more focused and more ambitious,which is more valuable than everything else to me...so thanks again guys !...i think this is goin´to be the final v before subbing...unless there are no more complaints.....

Thats really cool. Great choice of colours :)

This came out great! So much better then the first version. Submit it and good luck!

Needs more camel toe.

^haha..yeeah thanks mezo!..wait...what?..um.....explanation,please....there are no animals in here...just cars...and fire and stuff...:-)

(*cough*i´m strugglin´with not pickin up your suggestion,but you know..the community starts at 13....*cough*)...do you think it´s sexistic though?..i hope not..it´s just some kind of tribute...and no animals,no desert,no bushes...just plain solid shit

i second the camel toe.