They should either be drawn with perspective, or not.. You shouldn't drawn them different ways. Also, it's a simple drawing so it's got to be perfect. You can have subtle details and still keep it simple
Thanks for all your feedback so far. It has been really helpful! Which eyes do you like better, the human eyes or the anime ones? Also, do you like the blue spotlight/circle or is it better without it? Thanks again!
hmmm, i think the milk carton looks a little too two-dimensional compared to the cereal box. it also doesnt look llike it's looking at the cereal, it looks like it's looking starigt ahead
I must say that although you are trying, and I must commend you for that, I don't like that you haven't changed the image, but meerly moved it. As far as my opinion goes, it still looks like it was done in MS Paint.
Also, I don't particullarly think that the eyes of the cereal box and milk box look too well together(try sticking with just one, I prefer the milk carton's eyes). They could also use more detailing. Perhaps a psuedo cereal brand that cleverly incorporates the subject?
This is most likely my final version, please check in after another week and I will inform you whether approval was accepted or denied. Thanks to anyone who left any comments and please keep your fingers crossed!