Please leave comments, I won't be offended!

the concept is cute, like for a little kid or something, but it looks like this took two minutes to make in MS Paint.

I agree, better detail and your perspective is off. Concept is cool just keep at it.

haha, with a little reworking, it could look like something Threadless would have printed.

What part should be reworked? All of it or are there specific parts?

there are alot of shirts like this on threadless.. but its a cool concept, touch it up a bit

mostly the cereal box

I like it, but I think its over-done. Reminds me of the Cookies Love Milk, and also of that "Milk and Cereal" song on the web.

They should either be drawn with perspective, or not.. You shouldn't drawn them different ways. Also, it's a simple drawing so it's got to be perfect. You can have subtle details and still keep it simple

You're perspective is still wrong.

i agree

nice but it isnt "catching"

hey why don't you get a carton of milk and a cereal box, and draw them in real life, then you can see how they look

Thanks for all your feedback so far. It has been really helpful! Which eyes do you like better, the human eyes or the anime ones? Also, do you like the blue spotlight/circle or is it better without it? Thanks again!

hmmm, i think the milk carton looks a little too two-dimensional compared to the cereal box. it also doesnt look llike it's looking at the cereal, it looks like it's looking starigt ahead

I must say that although you are trying, and I must commend you for that, I don't like that you haven't changed the image, but meerly moved it. As far as my opinion goes, it still looks like it was done in MS Paint.

Also, I don't particullarly think that the eyes of the cereal box and milk box look too well together(try sticking with just one, I prefer the milk carton's eyes). They could also use more detailing. Perhaps a psuedo cereal brand that cleverly incorporates the subject?
This definitely needs alot more work.

animé eyes are better, and i like this a lot.
but maybe change the speech to "you'd" instead of "you would", idk it was just bothering me.

I hope you guys like the changes....although I know its very similar to the previous one. Once again PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!

v6=v7 i think there was a mistake

Sorry! I made a careless error in version 6/7 with the width of the rext in the speech bubble and thought I might as well be completely up to date.

This is most likely my final version, please check in after another week and I will inform you whether approval was accepted or denied. Thanks to anyone who left any comments and please keep your fingers crossed!

the only thing im gonna say is thatthe eyes on the cereal shouldbe wide open and surprised,i like the idea!

It has been approved. Click here to vote http://www.threadless.com/submission/113972/You_Would_Be_Nothing_Without_Me

whoa....i experienced some technical difficulties as you can see. Anyhow I am back to the drawing board to fix the eyes! Telll me what you think!

wow!! its much much better,
and the idea is great!
but his new eyes r so sad =[ lol

I submitted this so heres the link if it gets approved

ahhh it didnt work ill give it to you later