actually this is awesome as is, as far as i'm concerned. if this were printed i'd buy it right now...people will probably tell you this needs color, but don't touch it. i like understated designs. very cool.

bump.

i think it looks great. the only thing i might want to see differently, is the smoke trailing from the car. it almost looks like the car is going to blaze up and break down after it lands.
maybe if there were just a couple thin black lines trailing, giving the impression of movement and speed, it might be more clear?

i like the colours, too!

I'd like to see it actually on the shirt rather than just the suggestion of placement. Presentation is important in your submission

I think center placement would be better. A slightly brighter gray might help for the highlight color(s). Really nice illustration, looks like San Francisco to me.

I like the illustration and the colors exactly how they are - Bio-bot is right on the sub. Drop it on the template if anything but I really like the design a lot

can't wait to see it in the running!

i love this. maybe have a little something falling from the car? like money or dripping blood or just gravel and crap. sweet colours and style.

Well done, I really like the style and perspective. I think you should add a hint o' color to the car, maybe in the tail lights, or by adding some sparks trailing behind. The grey is cool, but very dull. I think this would also work well large and centered.

i want to see what it would l ook like on a shirt please

that car is escaping the armpit!

The horizontal line in the foreground is a bit sharp. Molding it to the bump of the hill would avoid the impression that the car is flying into a set backdrop.

Which incidentally would also be a fun idea.

New version w/ highlight.

oo definitely love the newer version :3 i think you should submit it!

Yeah, it looks much better than the first version. I'm clicking "submit".

i think id like to see it bigger on the shirt

make it an option?

I agree, would look awesome if it was bigger on the shirt!

Ooh, good idea, B11. I was concentrating on the drawing only.

You should cover the front of the shirt. This is SUCH a cool design!

Yeah, covering the front is a good idea as you have many details in the design.
Looks great btw.

Wow, what a change in mood! I'm really glad you added the color, you definitly have my $5

awesome with the highlights- so much depth.

great work man! i'm guessin mel gibson and danny glover are in that car!

can u check out my critique?

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i like it.....looks good and able to go on a black shirt and being so dark that is money.
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