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Thanks for your suggestions! I tried adding halftones - it's my first time doing them, thoughts? I also changed the background to yellow, and some of the highlights on the shirt from yellow to blue. I also eliminated two colors, so now it's 6. I saved the files at a low quality to get them to upload - so if they look a little hazy that's why.
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The design looks great alone, but on the T it doesn't seem like there is enough contrast between the letters and the background. However, that could just be because of your lower quality upload.
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If not changing the contrast I would change the tee color. What about red or green?
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I agree with the contrast comment. The design is damn cute though! ^^
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This is so cute C: the only things I would say could be fixed would be the little rays behind the stars, they don't totally match up with the edges of the stars, which makes it look a little less clean cut.
Another thing would be that you have used all 8 unique colors Threadless allows, I would cut out as many colors as you can, because the less colors that you use, the more likely your design is to be picked for printing.
Goodluck! This is adorable!