need help with placement and color options.



also, would it be more threadlessy (yeah, i made it up) if it looked like it was coming out of a pouch... that way everyone can be a marsupial.

I think the head is too big for an adult shirt. That is just my opinion. I think your idea of it coming out of a pouch is great.

I think it is just too bland.

Yeah, go for the pouch idea and be sure

the shirt colors relate to the design.

its pretty nicely done, but to be honest i dont see the point of wearing a kangaroo head on a shirt

i think the colors got messed up in the conversion. thanks for the comments!

have to second torakami

now with a pouch

I LOVVVE IT! But.. If you make the shirt the same or lighter coler of the pouch, I think that would look a little better. I love kangaroos. You're Awesome :)

^on khaki

critique anyone?

it's so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!



i dont know if i'd wear it though. . .but it's adorable. it looks like one of my puppies.

maybe make the pouch the width of the shirt, rather than just the middle of it.

it would look more realistic.

or just make more sense.

it should probably be lower too. . . make the bottom of the pouch be at the bottom of the shirt.

mmmm yes. i will make it wider and lower. thanks!

I agree with the lower.

And wider? Are they really wider? I'm gonna have to go look up some pictures.

lower and wider. the one on the right shows some extra shading

if you say it needs work, could you please tell me how to improve?? thanks

I just think the linework itself is not the appropriate style for what you are trying to accomplish. It's just too "scribbly" if you want my opinion. The shading and highlights need to be rendered more smoothly. I don't know if you were going for the scribbly feel to mimic a kangaroo's fur, but since the rest of the shirt has no scribbly line work, I don't think it works. I like the idea, just want to see the linework handled differently.

ha thats funny. i just redid the entire pouch in a "cleaner" style and subbed it. thanks a lot for your input!

I love it, I really want it!

hopefully you'll also like the one i subbed, BORN2SHOPLC!



heh. thanks for the excitement :)

i don't know. i wish there was a story behind it. like more meaning to it.

dude i would so buy version 1



i think it's the best

I like the idea, but I think the pouch has too much detail. I'd leave more of the khaki showing through.. the pouch simply competes with the kangaroo too much..



love it otherwise

yeah. I think if you use the negative space as a good amount of the mid tone shading it would also help the shirt and art blend more naturally.

also i liked the size of V3 though maybe a little lower?

i think i subbed it with a huge print, but size can be changed. thanks for the comments everyone.

im bringing this to the front