Every comment will be highly appreciated, thanks! :)

her arms look too floppy, like she has no bones

are those the colors of the flag?

Hi!

Well, the design is based on a picture of a clay doll, it explains her arms :)

Yellow, blue, white (stars) and red are the colors of the flag

OH okay.. well it sounds like it has an audience, but maybe not universally understood? You might need to explain it in the comments if you submit.

Then I think I'll have to change the color of her dress...

It looks kind of sloppy. I agree about the arms, and even if you mean't for her to be a clay doll...it just looks like she has bad arms.

Even though I love Venezuela I think you could probably find something like this at a souvenir store.

You may want to make it look more clearly like a doll.

First of all, I'm from Venezuela so I think its kind of cool that there is a venezuelan design on threadless. Second I have to agree with Mr. Gomez, as it is right now it looks like a pretty version of what they would sell in the airport. Does it have to be based on a doll?, what about just illustrating another female image and playing with the flag concept, not necessarily on a dress but on her hair and face?

I'm excited to see what you come up with.

Cuidar es querer...

Oh wow, this critique has been resurrected! :-D

If I try to make her look like a doll maybe I could play with the idea of a venezuelan Barbie, making her look warmer and less plastic than regular ones :) If I don't go that way then probably I could change my point of view and fit it to a new idea of female image...

First of all I'll have to find that old Illustrator's file, hehe!

Logan: qué fino saber que hay más venezolanos en Threadless! :)