yes! yes. delicious! vast improvements. just by removing a little plant matter. diggin the hearts too. perhaps try making them a little bigger so you can tell they are hearts though?? but it looks mighty fine without changing them.
Not my style but it's well done. I could definitely see people wearing something like this. My only issue is that the placement looks kind of awkward to me. I guess there really isn't anywhere else where you could put it though. Nice design.
Like Kazyole, I don't know if I'd personally wear it personally, but I could see others wearing it. It's a nice design and I can't really think of how you could improve upon it. I'd say submit it.