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v1 Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts, current version








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orangehead
   orangehead on Jul 31 '11
May I introduce to you, the act you've known for all these years.
virgindog
virgindog on Jul 31 '11
I love this! The only thing I'm not sure about is using cream for the shirt color. Silver might be better, but either way, it's really good!

Please help me with this one. Thanks!
Ru Chery
Ru Chery on Jul 31 '11
wow!!! great work!! I think the design is great!! it is kinda hard to see the instruments in the background though maybe try a different color tee. perhaps gray or blue. overall great work!!!

ps. I just updated my design so please let me know what you think of the new version. I could really use your help and feedback.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/92457/Three_Wise_Munks
Dpearl22
Dpearl22 on Jul 31 '11
I agree, pump up the color of the installments. Or try adding a slightly darker shadow to the bottom of them. Great concept, love your color spectrum at the bottom =)

I'm so close submission, I need your opinion on Cat A Pillar
aetherium
aetherium on Jul 31 '11
I love this! My only suggestion is making the instruments more noticeable. Other than that, it's perfect! I just love the little mustaches. :D

Could you please rate my design? I'm close to submitting it. Thanks. What Really Happens: Tea Time
jonsuguiyama
jonsuguiyama on Jul 31 '11
Make the instruments more noticeable and change the tee color (something darker, maybe?) and get rid of that shadow (it's not really working as a shadow, because it looks flat like a pattern - the instruments should have little projected shadows too, but then it would pollute the composition).
keep it up! I'd score it 4 right now.
SClarke
SClarke on Jul 31 '11
Perfect! Make the instruments a little more noticeable and I think it's ready to go. Love the design!

Please score my design! Thank you!
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