"Your idea could use a little more work". For me, this is soooo ambiguous... Can anyone help me to improve this idea? I thought the illustration was great for the idea, is anything else you wold change or something??

Great work!

Well, I guess the question is, why does the fly need to fly on top of an airplane? What if the fly was the airplane. "Fly Air" --- play on words.

Good start though.

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draw the fly larger, so that the fly clamp the airplane with the legs...


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What is in the bottom left and right corners? I think that the fly needs to be cleaned up a bit and made black or a dark green in some places. The eyes need to be more detailed to look like a fly's eyes, they look kind of like disco balls in real life! Just some thoughts, cute idea though.

I think the fly is not big enough for the print. The left and right bottom are some graphics I always put on my illustrations, my signature and an F. With the fly bigger, it will be more detailed. Thanks!!!

I didnt know it was a fly on top. I was going to ask why the plain was wearing a hat with ears lol. So you could make the fly more obvious.
You prob shouldn't use the text ether.

good luck.

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Haha, ambiguous statement indeed (heard it myself before). I like the concept, and I like your style. Maybe it's because of the size of the image, but it did take me a minute to recognize the image atop the plane as being a fly. It's obvious now, but not at first. I like the kind of limited color palette, and wouldn't change it alot, but maybe adding a little more color to set the fly apart would help? If you get a second I'd appreciate your thoughts on my current critique: http://www.threadless.com/critique/92506/Ninja_Star
You knew that was coming, right? ;) Thanks!

At first I thought it was a brain with wings :) and I don't really get the idea of design either, sorry. very harmonic colouring and overall style though!

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I love the airplane and I like the fly but I would take the "flyaway" text out and not change anything else. These are my favorite colors btw.
If you take away the text I will definitely vote $5 for you.

Would you wear this?