hey everyone, rnrnI wanted to make the words fit the music on the description but I'm not sure about that because I am deaf. I need some critique on this design. tell me if you have any good suggestions for these words. rnrnthanks!rnrnother question: should this pic be with or without description?

Maybe you could highlight the special parts like jukebox, echo, ...
and make the technical stuff in the background a little bit lighter.
Because at the moment, if you see the design of a little distance it gets a gray mass.
You could also outline these parts in an other color or use a glow to outline them??!

I firstly want to say this is an awesome design, nice work here!!!!!!!

I really don't think anything is needed here, its all perfect! How about seeing it on a tee? Nice work again !!!

Can you comment on my critique?

Cool idea, but you're probably going to have the make the text a lot bigger to make it readable... but otherwise looks great!

Yes, yes! Just make the text bigger and you're ready! AWESOME! Let me know when is up for voting! :D


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i got nothing to say this one is awwwwwwesome ! just one thing like others said make the text little bit bigger .... let me know when you submit it i'd vote $$$$$5 !
pls help by voting / commenting!

Wow! Impressive. Perhaps the outside line just a bit thicker?

Would you mind critiquing my design? Thank you!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/91995/Turntable_DJ_Robot

Incredible...can't wait to see it on a tee! Some of the details might be hard to see once you actually put it on a tee, so maybe try making all the colors a bit darker? It looks great though, and after that you're ready to submit!

If you get the chance, please vote! Thanks so much!

i thk it great, it looks great and very thg is just right on it

if u dont mind check mine out
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Great job. But I doubt if the details appear on a shirt. Perhaps moreto highlight the contours.

Would you mind critiquing my design?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/91669/Ying_Yang_Clock

i think this is a kick ass design! i'd like to see it on the placement for further ideas but illustration wise it's superb!

I'd love to know your thought on my wip design:)
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Fantastic idea. However, the letters should be larger. Good work. Also check my if you find a moment: http://www.threadless.com/critique/92066/Drawing_hand

Great design! :)
Text could be scaled a bit, but i think that you need to highlight those parts and maybe change the color of those lines that are linking the words and the parts on a monkey, or maybe add those lines white outlines, you'll need to make them thicker i guess:P... you have to look closely to see exactly, where are those lines going, and that's not good i think.
I hope i've helped :)
Good luck.


If you find some time, could you take a look at my newest design? it would really help :P

That's so cool, I would like to see it on a shirt, maybe a beige shirt or a white one most definitely. After you put it on a shirt show us and submit 'cause it's pretty awesome, maybe the words a bit bigger so people are able to see them? But I like it, it says music all over :)

BTW, would you be so kind to Click here - "The Drunken Pirate Samurai Penguin" to comment & score my submission? Thank you :)

Yeah this design is basically perfect. The detail is insane! A bit of variance to the line widths and making the text a bit bigger is really all you need.

Please score my design when you get the chance!

Cool idea but I personally prefer without the description. Nice illo though :)


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thank you for your cool support! I hope you will like this new version.

Without description

Sweet monkey. It you wanted to keep the labels maybe use numbers and have a table of contents on the back of the tee. But I think it stands out better without the text.

if you wouldn't mind having a look at maybe leave a comment.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/91723/Covered_design_1

Epic and scary - Loads to keep your eyes busy here... Nice work.

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wow awesome. add a shadow on the ground and your good.
submit.


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Thanks!

I disagree about adding a shadow, since it's simpler this way and it's more like a sketch of the monkey's design rather than the monkey itself, I would submit as it is rate/comment mine

sweeeeet!! submit this ad don.t add shadow :)

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