the design is a little clunky. I would get rid of all the lines used with the line tool and redraw them by hang. Experiment more with Flash (i reconize the drawing part of the program), so you know how to use the paintbrush tool.
Is it easier to draw with a mouse using other programs then flash? I'm probably going to rework this entire design entirely, after my last midterm tuesday.
*does anyone know if illustrator or another program is more "mouse" friendly?*
no...i donīt know if there is any program which is so "mouse-friendy" at all....itīs very hard to draw with a mouse....if you have a scanner or plotter or have acces to any,iīd better make an analogue drawing,scan it and colorize it afterwards....best case would be if you know anyone who has a wacom or smth similar,itīs pretty much the same as if youīre drawing by hand,but itīs already digital then....i think you could get better results if you leave drawing with a mouse.....paper and pencil might be better then......
oh and forgot to say:.......i love magnamoth submissions!(serious!)i was thinking about collaborating when you had this call out....if just my english wouldnīt be that bad.....and if i wouldnīt be that lazy.......
dude itīs still very interesting with this collaboration idea....but would you like to have this done in anything which is not that magnamoth look?......i dunno....maybe you should have another try if itīs not that what you want it to be...iīm sure you can do it magna!..anyway iīve seen that you are lookin for a wacom..been succesful?..maybe we change into your blog better...
so far I have "run", "eminem", "kanye", and "pharrell" I'm thinking of adding another one, if you can think of anything else to help distinguish them please speak up.
some adjustments were made, added a bit more detail, added curtis 50 cent jackson, added a shirt pic (with the idea of not discriminating 'gainst ho's with bazongers.)