reworked version of design i submitted for critique a while back. All comments are helpful, Thanks!

nice. the bicycle and the top part of the phonograph loop flat and not as detailed. maybe bring some more colors into them.

LOVE the Say Anything homage, so clever and delightful. I look forward to seeing how this develops, because I want it to win. *grins*

Yes, I like this concept. Submit.....

Looking at this, it seems i need to redo the color scheme. Any thoughts on shirt colors? @ lailai : yeah i agree, good observation. Thanks everyone for the input!

I'm hung up on the bike. I know those front wheels were huge but it somehow seems too prominent to me. Awesome idea! How about brown and blue?

ooooh i love this.
not too sure about the green though, maybe on silver or natural.

Great idea and execution. The flowery background is a nice touch. Maybe try it on denim color? I could see this getting printed.


Feedback appreciated...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/9021/MONSTER_TRUCKS

I love the brown color scheme, but not so much on the green tee. It lloks good on the khaki background you have now.
This is an awesome design...great job!

the colors and the detail are great. i agree with wendymoon that the bike seems too prominent and i think in its current state steals focus from john cusack. you might try putting it more in the background. wonderful work so far!

This is terrific! Great concept and design! My one suggestion would be to maybe feature it on a real shirt, rather than using the flat t-shirt template (just a personal preference of mine). I find that a real shirt is more flattering to the design than the templates (you could even show it as worn by John Cusack :).

Although... maybe that would be too much, lol. In this one case you managed to make the template look half decent, so I think it would do really well even submitted as is.

I love the design, but I agree, it's not working on the green shirt. A nice neutral color would be great. :)

Thanks for all the input, working on a new version now. Yeah i agree about the template, it is an ugly beast. I just discovered the threadless flickr model group, so i think ill grab a blank shirt from there.

Ooooh!

LOVE the detail on the coat. And everything else. Awesome stuff.

the images look so great.. but the swirls coming out the top are so bland and uninteresting.. love the thin lines... maybe all of the background green stuff could be done like that? or just more parts of it in and out... and the background also could be a little less photoshop-ish..

for improvements sake:
-more originality on the swirls and the background foliage

in fact, what does foliage have to do with anything? You could do something completely different if you wanted. an old building? dunno.

Still, i like where this is going. Hope I was of some help.

HECK-A FUNNY! Yeah, just submit this... I'd snap this one up in a heartbeat.

you rock! Please submit this shirt soon so I can buy it.

new version. I put it into the running with the new threadless template that is twice this size and shows all the detail. I am also liking the new shirt colors. I am doing embroidery for the swirls. thanks everyone for the help!

weird what's with the bikes. I just entered a design with one of those as well.

oh yours was here longer... I didn't realize

Yeah ive been working on this one far too long. Here is the process i went through. I changed the name, but here is my previous version
http://www.threadless.com/critique/6137/Say_you_anything

Oh wow! That's come a long way. I like it.

tis lovely - sub it already :)

Nice ilustration

I love this! Definitely sub it

Brilliant! :D

I Adore this Shirt!!!! Say Anything is my favorite John Cusack movie!

I dig. I wouldn't change anything. Browns and blues make me smile.

wow this is amazing. i love it. submit away!
what program did you do this on?
if you have the time
http://www.threadless.com/critique/15671/Forbidden_Love

This is really terrific! Yeah, sub this baby!

i definitely think it looks alot better with the softer tones, and i love the old-style design!

Lol, talk about confusion. I see you already subbed this, ages ago! Anyway, good luck for a print. I'd better go to sleep now...

youre work is great.... thanks for the critique...

-Wimpy-

so good.