mmmm? was originally a simple doodle in my government notebook. Maybe its not t-shirt material but I just wanted some critique

it's a beautiful illo!
Are you planning on leaving as a sketch/sepia or will you be coloring or vectorizing it?

probably sketch....

I like it! Just think the wing maybe needs some cleaning up... but otherwise I like as is.

I think it needs another wing. but.. I do like it!

You could put a dragon wing, or butterfly, or something, on the right side.

Where would the placement be if you do want the design to become a shirt?


Please help Critique my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/8979/It_only_works_if_your_Superman

ooo, I like jancola's idea w/ another wing...keep going it's really beautiful :)

i love it, and keep it sketchy.

I would keep the sketch as it is but maybe introduce another color. Looks good though.

love the idea,,, but first thing my mind and feeling told me,,, it should have another wing , and show its length and power both spread and am fine with the rest expect duno if u can add glimpse of he behind limbs and this lion head should be so much bigger, and also the head beside it should be in the right position ot get rid of it also i see this design can be in some sexi shimmer so show us wat u can do good luck

w t f. why isn't this working.

oh. because img tags aren't allowed.

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