Hey, no answer??

I hate no answers in the critique section!



It made me laugh and that's great :D

I'd prefer more contrast and another background as well

as a more specific laughing creature.

It looks like a mix of Super Marios Bowser and a bear...



I hope this helps a bit :)

lol. i don't know if it'd be funny without the title though. This is what my job is like sometimes so i can relate. maybe a dark shirt for such light colors?

cheers guys....but this is still work in progress....not a big job so far.....think the text will have some teeth,laughin at the rabbit...this was one of my 1st one in the critiques...made the mistake to start work on a white tee.....not much appreciated.also textwork in there is not as good as it could be....i know....rabbits might be a worn out thing,too.....v2 has to be complete different.....but thank yo fo tha comments anyway

yes, bold colours please!

lol nice job man, I actually really like this. The only suggestion I have though is darker colours, as of right now its a bit difficult to see.

used more intense colours and added some fellas......

I thought these had to be on a threadless Tee Template ?

itīs supposed to be cream,or are you talkin about placement???

placement will be the same as in v1,just couldnīt put any model or shirt in there īcause it has already 249kb ...need to figure out how to save it with less kb and iīll show you it on the tee.....also

iīm not sure why cool fonzie bears hair turned out so pixelated here...????..still workin on it but if you have any helpful suggestion itīs goin to be very appreciated....

ahh..sorry fishpigg i meant`natural`actually not `cream`.....

thanks to everyone who commented and helped a bit so far.....think iīll try some other tee colours with the next version......

great use of 8 colors

The drawing is really good.

Cute, I just wouldn;t wear it.

another try....pale yellow wasnīt the best choice..also..dang!..there was a 9th colour hiding in the former v...

hey hershel, how are you doing?



Wow, a great development from Version 1 to now. I love the style and details.

Only critique is that you don't get immediately why they're all laughing at the rabbit. (assuming someone doesn't know the title)

I honestly think version 1 is better. Perhaps it could be improved by some brighter colors, but the later versions become a bit messy for my taste. Great idea though, you should develop it :)