tell me what you think of my first submission

comments would be nice

there isn't enough to it......seems sparce. do another version and stick it up :-)

just wondering if the idea is apparent...enough

BU mp i need input!!!

i for one don't understand the reference. why rubber vs. glue?

"i'm rubber, your glue, whatever you say bounces off me and sticks to you"

I can't see the rubber, perhaps it could be better. Now join my critiques . It's my firs submission too!!!



P.S. please, don't look at my english grammar. I'm an outsider here...

I don't understand the reference either.



To better it, try being more stylized and a different angle.



I commented-- now will you stop linking people here to get comments? It's really quite rude.

sorry, can't understand what's going on there...

The reference I fine, at least I got it right away, but then my first language is english and all that, I know there are alot of people who speak dif languages as their first and would therefore probably not get the reference, but anyway. Seriously, re -imagine it and throw up another version see what people think.

I think the concept is cool, but it should be more sequential and readable. Think about how comics (particularly one panel comics) are in the newspapers. Perhaps study them and see how they draw each action.



I like the concept though.

Im not fan of stick figures. If you can make a close up of whats happening with what they are saying would be cool.

good idea.....maybe more detail

here is the design by itself, not different, will change later

might change all of the words to be the same to show how the insults are thrown, bounced, and stuck.

CRAP! NOOOOOOOOOOO



voted needs work

STOP LINKING PLEASE! and whats revelc mean?

i was thinking about using my last color to put a one color playground in the background to make the design pop, how does that sounds??

It really just needs to be drawn better. It looks really flat, and well... ugly

agree with above. i'd hold off on a background for now

amazing trash

good concept. it does seem a bit weak but that could be corrected with a bit more time.

You know what would be really great? If you stopped whoring out links to this everywhere.