Hallelujah

input?

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great character, love his expression. What if you had him munching on a score card, I dunno just a suggestion.

crits

yay, a nibble
cool idear herky

i like ridiculous bullshit. the goats face doesn't seem to suit the rest of it though.

more white showing on the body?

i don't get it.... are these names just random names?
agree with d3d that the goats face/mouth is a bit too cartoonish wich doesn't fit the rest of the goat.

mainly goat names Billy-goat, nanny-goat
a goat is called a kid, thus kiddo

& arzie means cedar

i'll work on the goat for a V2

o yea, it's a kinda popular misheard lyrics
of Michael row the boat ashore, Hallelujah

lol

this is fantastic! the randomness is perfectly random without trying too hard. the goat is perfect. the score card is great. the only tuning i would do is with the speech/thought bubble. it feels somewhat flat and dosent yet feel like it works with the compostion. im thinking if you make the bubble work around the score card more. meaning - right now it feels like the score card was placed within the bubble rather than the bubble being created for the scorecard. it looks like you have a color or two left to work with? maybe make the bubble a shade or two off of white within the background color family? great stuff ren!

(agreed the crits suck - im glad i caught this!)

yeah yeah! this is hilarious!!
....and what corey9 said, that would make this perfect :D

oh yes nibbling on a score card.

so cute

Score card nibbling is a good idea. Maybe you could do just the head of the goat? It would be easier to see the nibbling and everything. Just a little unimportant detail, but I think it would be cool(er) if you made it look like each name were written by a different person.

by the way i made a blog of critiques people should check out and you're in it!

people make blogs of subs to check out a lot, and i thought i'd do one for critiques! go post on it so it doesn't die!

hey thanks Laurn
working on V2 right now

Lauren

hahah! this is kind of dada but I love it.

I love it, makes me want to row my boat ashore.

You should leave one of the names blank so that the person wearing the shirt can write their own name with a sharpy

^cool idear kaza
u peeps make the crits awesome

I really like the goat so much.

hey, thx Alison
i really gotta finish/sub this

sub this thing already ren!

this is absolutely random but I like the details on the goat

thank y'allit's up for voting