first one put up for critique

ahhh, umm.. .. .... ... (sigh), i just can't do it man. no, i'm sorry, just no. its a really bad pun. like REALLY bad. the shirt is exactly what you expect for the pun, but with a bad idea, and even a good execution on it, more or less. or at least a clean execution on it, a bad idea is just a bad idea. keep at threadless, but go for a more original style next time. people respond better to that.

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Alright, I thought it would come out better than it did. Im going to try this again but from a different angle.