...'cause they fall asllep hahahaha

any sugestion? concept , placemente, size and stuff...anything! i want post this so bad but it got to stay perfect...so any comment will help
thanks

AMAZING!
titles too long though
the halftones of the shadow below him are a little too big for my tastes.
sub it I say

OMG this is amazing!!!

very nice! i'd make it a little smaller. and move the little bird that is pecking so he is not so in line with the bird above him.

i don't think i would have gotten that he is asleep without the title, but it is really beautiful so i don't know if that matters too much.

i like it but i didnt get that he was asleep either

maybe his head could be drooping

Call it the "eightfold pathed out", and then stp me for the idea.

very nice, you have my $5

Nice idea! Too big on the shirt, though. The pajama pattern is a little too sharp and digital looking, maybe soften it.

well at least he fell asleep with his pajamas on. you'd think the birds singing on the tree growing out of his head would wake him up, but some people are seriously heavy sleepers i guess.

yeah, i agree that it should be smaller on the shirt, and the pajama pattern is kinda busy on the eyes. this is really very well done though.

ok i'm gonna backpedal a little, i looked at this again on the shirt and maybe the large size looks good to me after all, it does make it different.

love it

well thanks guy, i gess i know what to change here...really thanks!

i'm not shure about the title either
any sugestion?

the peacfull monk?

beautiful!!!

amazing!

did some little changes that you guys told me too
still not shure about the title
please help me :p i wont subimit until its perfect to me
:p

I love this!! Hurry up & submit so it can win & I can buy it!!! :D

but this title...do u like/agree with it?

I like the title....and it peeked my interest, making me click on your critique :)

i want to see a graceful spider to go with the webs. this is beautiful though.

meditation gone wrong.
maybe just a simple title...meditation.
nothing too fancy.

i like meditation gone wrong
gonna think about this

i'll do this spider too

thanks

sub it