alright ladies and gents

feedback please

this is my third submission yet

my first was not accepted and my second is not doing so hot

this time around I decided to do a critique to find out what I should tweak before rushing headlong into submission!

thanks :)



I rather like this design

Came up with it in art history class...I pay good attention :P

uhmm?

feedback?

He needs to be doing something. Otherwise its just a guy on a shirt. I like the style and colors. maybe a bird on his head pooping? Naw. I don't know. The way his lip goes out is cool.

Hes very cute just needs more

thanks!

*puts thinking cap on*

riding a bike about to hit a rock. ummm i don't know. he looks kinda goofy in a cute way. so maybe something funny

This is freakin SWEET!!!

I like his expression. The green is maybe a bit too green.

perhaps a balloon tied around his waist?

or possibly a bird...shocked that he can only fly as far as the string will allow

sound good?

I think I like that one!

this is great! He needs a friend...maybe a pet or, like Kalien said, having doing something.....he needs a reason for that dazed look on his face...he really is cute :)

I was thinking about perhaps putting one of those coin operated arm-wrestling machines across the room from him

or

have him be the second in a line of four figures, the rest of the figures are the white and black standard "bathroom" men figures...he will stand out a lot and it will be like, breaking the mold.

or

putting a wrecked bicycle across from him, wheels still spinning



any thoughts?

which one strikes you as best?

the bike wreck sounds good, but the arm wrestling thing sounds better...it's just weird enough to go with his weirdness:)

I'm going to go with the arm machine idea

new draft within the week!

cool, can't wait to see V2