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lucusice
lucusice on Mar 28 '11
Angry Banana! need some revision ideas from you guys. Preciate it!
Hyperworm
Hyperworm on Mar 28 '11
The palms are in a different style, and the banana and monkey are great so I think you should make it the same style (although it's not necessary... it's a good background)
the monkey's colors are kinda bad after some staring...
the banana's are great.
It doesn't have an angry expression, just a crazy one, the eyes are a bit too nice/happy.

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bob.surrao
bob.surrao on Apr 05 '11
The banana looks kinda cool, but I just wish that I could see more of him. Maybe lose the background trees all together and just make him the center piece - smaller and whole(legs and all).

And the monkey needs to get way bigger. That will also give you a chance to put in some more detail.

Is that salt on his head? Why salt?

Also, colored background?
greymadder
greymadder on Apr 05 '11
I think bob is pretty on the money with his suggestions!

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coll_1987
coll_1987 on Apr 05 '11
Yup I also agree with bob.surrao. I also think the monkey would look better a darker shade of brown. Good luck.
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