im aware that it still looks kinda imcomplete, but thats what critique is for, right?? ^___^

this is soo nice ff... even better on the model's shirt color. i'll save my $5 till then! :D

i think its very cool. Maybe have the hair fall back more around her so it doesnt look like it sticks out to a side.

u mean like more down her back?...

ooh i kinda see what u mean now...

Wow, this is already quite beautiful :)

I think the girl needs a bit more work on her face, her eyes seem a bit glazed, instead of loving for her friend.

Perhaps a bit more definition on the wee foxy (well, it looks like a pine marten, actually *G*), to give him some character as well.

I really look forward to seeing how this develops. :)

yep you got it :)

her facial features need to move up on her face. think about were her ears would be and that eyes are ear level. Then place mouth and nose accordingly.

Oh and this is beautiful!

but she's looking down!.... ionno .. i stink with perspective

i think if you move her facial features up more, but still have her eyes looking down, that combo with her head tilted will still make her look that way

:) I do too.

just try it. see what you think. :)

look at Audrey Kawasakis stuff. Its good reference.

^ agree about moving up the features a bit, but this is coming along really nice. It has a great, organic flow on the shirt.

i love the foliage and blossoms. maybe make her breasts more similar in size?

Very nice. I would buy it :)

highlight the hair with the yellow color. i love how the tee color is incorporated at the bottom part

ok i took all the suggestions into account into this version ( i think)
facial feattures moved up a lil ( actually i redrew them), the hair is fixed .. and the fox looks more like an animal now..

whats wrong with her breasts?

yeah i was kinda in debate to highlight her hair or not....

only one spare color, already got 4 in there lol

I kind of liked how she looked sligtly more melancholy in the first one (in terms of mood).

slightly

other than that, it's ace

i can see what that person was saying about the boobs. they do look different sizes. Like the fixed hair tho. And i might agree and say go back to the old lips

OKAY.. does her boobs look better? or did i fix the wrong one hahahaha...

she's also not as smiley, or should i make her sad instead? I want her to be SEMI-happy though, now if the fox died or something, then she'd be completely sad.

comments?

too happy looking. bring down the eyebrows. think about where your eyebrows are.

i think it looks really great so far

so her expression is the only thing i need to work on?

I don't see any difference in her breasts between the last two versions -- the further-away one still looks too big. This is really pretty, though.

it is smaller in version 3, ionno.. i cant see how its bigger....

should i do anything with the hair?

Hair is perfect. Step away from the hair.

i agree with kalien and say move the eyebrows down

OK, clicking the arrows back and forth to see the difference, it looks like you moved the bottom of it up more, but it still sticks out the same amount. I think it's more the sticky-outiness that's making it look bigger.

Yeah, don't touch the hair! It's beautiful.

HAHA ok... i'll fix her boobs... and leave the hair alone. and the eyebrows....

ok, i don't know how to describe this, but those blank streaks where here legs would be look odd. don't misunderstand, i'm not saying she needs legs, i like that she's turning into a tree, it's just those empty spaces might look better filled in with more tree...

looks good though.

I like it. Its graceful. I like her smiling. Not sad. Excellent.

okay, i think this is the last version.
the boob is fixed, i think. its smaller at least. and the eye brows are moved down a little. Hair is untouched, dont worry lol.

ionno about the 'blank 'streaks' becuase a lot of people like how the shirt color seeps through the design, so i think i'll leave them like that...

but i think i'm done tweaking with the expression (with the exception of the eyebrows) because she's not bright and happy, but.. well.. not exactly sad either.

is it ready to be submitted?

yes, looks good (=

She looks bright and happy to me, so if that's not what you want, then no. But otherwise I think it's perfect!

ah nice. the far breast looks like it bulges out a bit too much. MAybe some shading on her like on the fox only not fur. :)

cool but tell if i am missing something i can't tell the difference between v4 and the other vs

if you want her face to look less bright try making her less wide eyed by bringing the lash line down.

hmm....if i would be you ,i´d give a shit about my opinion after being drawing this......lovely,really.especially with the "morphing" idea hair/wood and how you executed it(i like it with the blank streats too ).....sub ,i´ll score.....

its funny when drawing some things they don't have to be perfect looking to e well done but a human face has to be dead on. When I draw a face it takes me longer than the rest of the drawing. :)

hahha. i'mma go ahead and sub it then. lets nope nobody focuses too much on the boobs....haha

thanks everyone for the comment!, its subbed.

Good luck!

yay tell us when it up so we can vote

definitely will do :)

this came out really beautiful. I love your style...goos luck in the voting :)

looks great!

woowww... i cant believe i got 12 votes for submit and not a single on the others! ^^... u guys ROCK!

its so pretty!!! good luck!

Beautiful.

This is gorgeous, I'd buy it. The only thing I might change is have a few pieces of the hair come over the front of her, but I like her expression as is. She should be happy, she's got a fluffy fox ;)

very sweet ^^!!

It sure is lovely. She does look quite happy, but i do not think that is an issue. (I don't however, see any sadness there, if that was what you were going for)

It sure is lovely. She does look quite happy, but i do not think that is an issue. (I don't however, see any sadness there, if that was what you were going for)

sorry for the double-post (now triple. Ugh)

thx! i just wish i wouldn't have to wait so long for threadless to approve it haha xD

YAY its up