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v1 Zombie Brains, 437 days ago, click to expand
v2 Zombie Brains, current version








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Version 1 - 437 days ago
Version 2 - 435 days ago

brentz
brentz on Mar 17 '11
I've changed some stuff, like the gum color, was a nice tip. And faded the background, and it's better now! tryed to change the brain color, but doesn't work.. this color just fiit with the illo. thansk for the help! and here is the link to a bigger version!

Thanks to all!
IamDude
IamDude on Mar 18 '11
I like the brain color! Colors are cool
I'll just get off the text. And do you try with no background?

Otherwise, the style is really cool ! Great Job

Score Invisibleman?
JAZZ2D
JAZZ2D on Mar 18 '11
haha! I like the idea, totally unexpected with the zombie brains lol
Colors and technique are very retro late 1980s cartoon.
The only thing I'd change is the placement of the title, I would move it to the top.
v.calahan
   v.calahan on Mar 19 '11
Missed the first post but this is clearly improved… I'd probably lose the type and, while keeping same colors, just de-saturate the vivid ones a little (brain, tongue)? Maybe I'm late but that's what I sees…
Cheers and thx for your support!
Francesco Santoro
Francesco Santoro on Mar 20 '11
Very very nice!


(Some shadows on brain?)
Okt1v3
Okt1v3 on Mar 20 '11
Yes a few shadows on some of the brain parts! Just to even see if it's what you want, because it could be the flat style of colour your after...but I reckon you should at least try putting to shadows on brain..the way you have with the tongue :)!

What do you think of mine so far!? Go Go :)
helenangel
helenangel on Mar 20 '11
totally agree with the shadow tip.the same thing i observed.it'll surely enhance the brain composition.
Purple Cactus
Purple Cactus on Mar 20 '11
Whats not to love! Great colour scheme and cartoon style illo. Love the text too! Submit this bad boy..

Please take a peek at Aces & eights if you have a mo
brentz
brentz on Mar 20 '11
Thanks for all tips guys! I would improve the brain colors, but I've already sent xP
Have some other ideas to work on! hahah
wish me luck, and gimme 5!

;D
poylie
poylie on Mar 20 '11
This is so cool! i really like how you did the details of the brain, really cool illo, i will surely give you 5, just let us know when its up

hope you have time to look at mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86640/Life_is_a_gift

and
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86230/Fail_To_Prepare
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