the whole bunch of the nerdberries, created as vector pics. pls help me to let them join the whole world. and some ideas which/ where to place on a shirt. thx =)

Buahaha this is so awesome! Put it on a shirt for us so we can see placement!!!!! Maybe just in the middle chest!

If you could please COMMENT and SCORE that would be great!
HERE!

put it on a shirt template to show u how i guess it should be

Cool design and nice color choices!

If you have a chance take a look to my critique:ANIMETRIS, and score my: MOSAICRED HEART.Thanks!

For some reason I'm not catching the reference but the illos are done quite well.

nerdberrie ;)

sry, the post above is kinda weird..
the design is a mishmash of english and german
in germany a strawberry is an Erdbeere, with the glassees on a Nerdbeere, englisch nerdberrie ,)

clue berry is the best! I would try a "regular"- typeface and maybe smaller.
What about eyes and a mouth? You donĀ“t want them?

Please score my
Dreamcatcher

Now I got ya, its a fun idea.

@ mezla: i tried to keep the design as simple as possible
and i think it looks quite better without any kind of face, but i will give it a try and upload it ;)

great! but you can improve it... you can change the font, or position the fruits and text... =D

No face is cool =) A different typesetting would be interesting!

Cool idea, I agree about a font, maybe try a different font. Other than that I think it looks cool.

i'll try some ;) and the guys who clicked "don't submit": could u pls give me some reasons, so i can make my designs better, would be great ;)

funny :)
I like it more with grey backgound...

many guys asked for some other fonts, so now i made a bunch of 5 different kinds of fonts (they are not the final ones, they only represents the groups of fonts i'd like to use):

- the grundgy one
- the halftoned / dotted one,
- the old look one (with fine lines)
- the technical one
- the designer one

pls gimme some feedback =)

I really didn't get it until i read the comments, even after i still don't get the names.
the illustrations are really nice, and i don't think they need the text at all (unless it's needed for the concept i don't get)

i think the clue berry's font is the best, you should make sure though it's not a copyrighted font.
also i would've like the 2 top berries to have a little difference in their leaves.

i've choosen the names as a rhyme for the original ones

raspberry - mat h. berry
blackberry - crack berry
blueberry - clue berry
strawberry - haw berry

i wanted the names fit to the nerdy berries

the most font's i have are free-fonts, but be sure i will watch accuratly before submitting ;)

the berries look cool on the green background
nice title - love the distressed font
the names don't work for me but I like the idea and the overall look

I don't think you need the berries to have names. If you do keep the names under each berry, they should be one font only and I would not choose the Crack Berry's font, it looks rather thin and that you'd have to be ontop of the wearer to read it. The font for Haw Berry wouldn't be too bad for the shirt and Clue Berry's font seems very Men In Black, like you'd find laptops and electrical devices named in that font.
The raspberry and black berry seem to twinlike to me, if they had different glasses it would be more variety.

sry, which font u mean? (i'm german guy) ^^

the top berries actually are twins in my concept ^^

I like the shirt design a lot. I like that every berry is on the shirt and they each are nerds. My favorite berry is the Clue Berry. The Clue Berry looks nice.


http://www.threadless.com/critique/85826/One_Man_Rock_Band

this is the best "free for commercial use" font i found.... very hard to find some, if u have some sites where to find (mainly for commercial use, not only for personal) then pls put them in the comments...

enjoy ;)

view my other critique too: give peace a chance

I'm a little confused by this tee, I've read your explanations, but am finding that I'm still not really getting it....

As for the fonts... I think you could do this tshirt up without any type at all and it definitely doesn't need the title on it.. BUT if you must include the writing, I wouldn't use any of those fonts.
I would use a simple clean lowercase sans serif font like Helvetica (but don't actually use helvetica, it's a little too obvious)

Otherwise, I really like the illustration style of the berries themselves.

oops as I was posting, you submitted your revision. As for this new font you've got here, I actually like it a LOT better than the other ones you were using.

nerdberry..

in german there's a joke telling: which veggie nerds prefer? an napple and a nerdberrie....only cuz u can add this nerdy touch to the words...hope u got ;)

I love it!!! submit it....!!!

My Desing comment tis

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I think that you are better off going with just pictures than with pictures and text. Also, I think the leaves on the top two berries are too detailed and don't match the style of the rest of the drawing. I do the like the colors and the way the berry parts-of-the-berry are illustrated.

If you have a moment, please vote $5 for my WORLD'S SEXIEST BIRDS! shirt. Thanks!

but i like the names so much ^^ spend some hours to find rhymes of the original names...
i'll try to change the leaves design ;)

Nice design. I, too, would get rid of the text. I find the names unnecessary and a little distracting. I didn't understand until I read your explanation. Only one of them has an actual first name (unless crack, flaw, and clue are common German names, in which case I apologize). I think the design would be improved by omitted them.

no they are actually no names in germany too ^^ ok ok, next version without the names...but what about the headline? leave it or kick?

haha funny Please Vote on mine

Awesome design. It definitely could do with a better font.
Check out dafont.com :)

very well done, clever and well thought out, submit it already!

here's my design!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85869/Yeti_version_3

i tried dafont.com...and all fonts i liked for this design AND which where free..had a license in the .rar which says NO to commercial use ;)

submit this! it looks very nice :D
please critique mine if you have time http://www.threadless.com/critique/85094/Snowl

i think it looks great i would just consider losing the title maybe but i also could live with it :]

so many asked me to, now i lost the title and the names.... does it look better now? worked on the leaves of the two top berries

simple and nice. the design overall looks very clean and neat.
the berries are cute and cool.

submit it.

i like it! perhaps move them a little bit closer together? that's it.
other than that this is great!

if you have a second later:
Tentacle Treat

Great design!!!! its funny and original great work. I wonder what it would look like on a model. Also try experimenting other shirt colors. other then that good work.

I just updated my design so please let me know what you think of the new version. I could really use your help and feedback. Thank you so much.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

A bit adjustment for the white color behind the glasses of lower nerdberries could make them better i think.

Like the version 2 best, just need to change the typo a bit to suite your illo. Otherwise is nice

looks great, i would make the berry a little bigger though, if the names are gone.

i need help with mine, check it out if you have a sec:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85630/Love

i'm thinking of make a collection, with each berry by it's own..perhaps then i can leav the names and the title...i'll try later
and i'll try a halftone for the white areas behind the glasses maybe

thx guys =)

cool!
i would say if you find something to make em say that maybe is related to their being a fruit ( i don't know...maybe there is an html code or something nerdy that fits with strawberries ;D) it would be great!

btw, will you help me with mine?? ;) thanx!!! :)



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Haha I like this, I think it looks better without the type, especially when there's four of them. Maybe by themselves as you mentioned it would look nice with their names below each.

When I look at it, the gap separating the berrys that runs down the centre seems too big, not by much though, it just makes me want to pull the berrys together a little.

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cute:)
Maybe you would move them a little bit closer each other.

made the berries taller and put them more together
also tried my first flash preview, hope u like

I don't think I get it. It looks good though!

I like the illustration but I am not sure about the placement. Maybe make it a pattern!!!

awesome design. I like it when you give the berry descriptions its funny. I think flow berry and crack berry are very funny , the rest I don't really get they just look cool. I'd definitely suggest just submitting flow and crack berry!

thnx for help, I subbed a new version for you to see tooting stars

I agree with Tager01, a pattern would be awesome. I like the idea. I wouldn't tweak it to much because the design works.

haha very nice...down the fruit draw a shadow..;)

a pattern...mhm sounds cool, i'll make one for next version

Hi ! i really like the vector style of this tee design, i agree with futurology that it looked really good with the humorous text underneath but it looks good without it as well. i like the distressed text used i v3. i was wondering if i could pick your brain and ask you how you got the flash file small enough to upload? i fnally got my flash presentation to work and now it is too big! :( i compressed it and the images i used were already compressed as i saved for web. i have even lowered the quality but it is still twice as big as it should be! eek! any thoughts would be really greatly appreciated!

i made this design as a vector graphic and exported them as less than 250kb jpg.... i had the same prob first... when u imported the jpgs in flash, right-click at them in the library, choose proberties (i have a german flash, hope this is right) and then, in the windows appeared, choose the lower checkbox and type 80 (where the max is 100), then click on "testing" button, and it will show u how much kbs the pic will have...then u only have to do this on all design-pics in library and count them together to be sure they are not more then 250kbs... hope u got it
if not, feel free to write a message at facebook ( Christian Wußmann)

This is great, I am glad you took the text out. I think this is ready to submit, I really like your vector style.

Thanks for your comment on mine.

i like it i like the colors they look good really brilliant

Message in a bottle

i'm just thinking of a glow effect for the glasses...not when it's a pattern, but on the big prints maybe...
what do u think?

I like the idea of one Tee for each berry best and i think the glow effect would bee quite cool for the classes. but i'd too say: only on the big prints.

my, this is really cool. i totally want those 4 shirts!

i made a pattern, which u can see on slider 4...but i don't like it.... tell me what u think about
i also added the glow effect which u can see on slider 3
i think it would be rly cool

I like the glow effect but Im really not into the pattern, good job ^^

nerdberries still cool, glow effect cool, but the pattern I don't like, too.

some help for me?
rock the prudence

This is awesome!!! I love the glow effect!!! I wonder though... what your design would look like with another shirt color. Your design looks great to be on another color other than green. Try your design on a light blue shirt and see if you like it. Overall great work. Let me know if you have any new versions of your design so I could check it out.

Thank you so much your comment and feedback on my design really appreciate it. I'm going to work on my design right now so you could check it out when you get a chance. Thanks again.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

hey bud, i think its really cool that you put in that glow effect.

However, I don't think its going to help your chances of a print, at least for me glow is just a novelty unless it has an important role in your design. I only like glow when it shows something that you couldn't see unless its dark. Definitely I'd get rid of the glow, in my opinion.

I also don't like the pattern tee. I think the individual tees with text is great, although the font isn't doing it for me. And is there a joke behind the red berry and the blue berry because I don't get it?

I'm between the 4 berries on a tee with NO TEXT and individual shirts WITH TEXT (but I think you should try another font, something more organic?). Hope that helps, let me know when you put the next one up.

jejejee cute!! I like forest fruits :D

please check my two critiques!!

BTW I love this tee i think the berries look brilliant! (for people that don't realize I've been commenting on this for a while :))

BTW I love this tee i think the berries look brilliant! (for people that don't realize I've been commenting on this for a while :))

I love the glow effect. They are realy cute...I think you can remove the texts or try something different.

I absolutely love it! The glow in the dark option is awesome! I think is ready to submit!

If you have a chance take a look at my critique:ANIMETRIS. Comments and ideas are most appreciated. Thanks!

thx futurelogy ^^ and also thx to all of u =)
i contacted threadless and thay said it's possible to make a collection: one tee with the 4 charas and 4 tees with each berry itself ^^ and there is a joke behind all the berries names...but it's kind a mishmash of german and english, so hard to descripe ^^

i'll check some other fonts to but have to be sure, they are free for commercial, it's important...

oh my goodnes, this is funky, I really love it, I wish I knew how to make things do the mergigers, it's awesome! incredibly well done, push it straight into the running.

Thankyou so much for your comments on my design, very kind... Thanks again!!

I like the glowy ones with the names underneath, awesome!!

I don't really like the pattern, too girly and hippyish for me I think.
Like all the others though and everyone else seem to too.

Anyone want to have a look at mine?
camel games

nice idea :D i like it

nice idea

add the leafy texture to the strawberry
i like the first version - the four together

if you have time. can you help me with my design? http://www.threadless.com/critique/85550/Hipo_dots

Nerdberries rock.

i'd suggest a little more detail on glasses and possibly a reflection on glass. cool idea... could the leaves be made to look like more nerdy hairstyles?

some tee-color previews..don't look at the quality, it has to be bad cuz else the file would be more than 250kb
pls tell me, which tee-colors i shall put into the submissions presentation

thx ;)

I like best Tee-colour 2 for all berries.
Or would you like to have one Coulour for each berry? Then I'd take differend shapes of something greyish, I think.

no no, one tee-color for all i think...

hahaha
Nice. How about combining all of them in one tee? like the nerdtuttu fruti...
Much much much better!!! Cool dude
I'd only redraw the claws a bit.
By the way, how do you do the flash presentation????


Check my design out and tell me what you think of V1 & V2 !
ALL TOGETHER NOW

check the other versions, i will make a collection with one tee with all the 4 berries and 4 tees each by itself ;)

there are some flash-templates in here, u can use for free...i'll send u the links too them when i find them again ^^ there u only have to replace the jpgs...

and what do u mean with "claws"?

ahahah i want flaw berry...that's a good idea

i saw the versions, but your composition with the 4 is reather static. Try putting them in a line or a group, and delete the names. Play around.
If you use the separated you are only gonna get one submision, cause threadless doesnt allow different submisions of the same concept.

I didn't realize you can't sub multiple, MacGuffin brings up a good point.

ohh its "flaw berry?" i thought it was "flow berry" because of his nice hair, and "flow" is a slang commonly used when talking about long nice hair.

Annd I just got the joke behind "Math berry" haha! nice.

I'd say combine them on one tee , it would be a shame to loose all these cool berries.

I like the firts :D nice color choice!!

@macguffin: i asked threadless if it's possible to sub a collection like i want to, one with 4 charas and 4 with every chara itself, and they said:

"Thank you for your email. Each tee design must be submitted separately; however, you can title them as a collection and put in the "About my design" section information of them as a collection."

i think crackberry on the clueberry t shirt, they look great.

i need some help with mine too, check it out if you have a sec
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85630/Love

i'm referring to the first picture...

have you tried them on a color maybe dark greyish something, I liked the green also,but out of these 4 I'd pick 2.
And also four of them together provided a balance in whole like mat h. berry and flaw berry positioned in diagonals. I really like the highlights by the way. Thanks for critiqueing my design Snowl :)

i prefer 1st and 3rd pic : )

The fourth one, 'cause then I could wear the purple one! I'm still lovin' these designs, and thank you very much for your comments on mine!!

there are 5 sliders at the right top corner @designnobis, so 20 tee colors to pick =)

i've put the 4 berries in a row...for different tee-colors pls view the version before this...there are 5 sliders in the right top corner, so 20 tee-colors at all ;) enjoy

and i'll use only one tee color for each berry design, not 4 or 5 different ones ;)

wooow.. awesome design!! love it :D just sub it.!! :D

hey can you give some comment too :D love to hear it :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85354/shout_it_out

Haha really cute, submit :D

Check mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/86083/Nintendo_King

i like it all in one row ~ so cute : D

keep the glow in the dark - it's awesome!

dude they are all sweet! its impossible to pick you gotta do it for us :)

I like crackberry at 10.
clueberry 11, 7, or 3
Flowberry 4, or yellow.
Mathberry yellow, 9

I think i like best 19, 10, 7
I'm not so sure the glow in the dark is necessary (although threadless is missing glow in the dark glasses i believe)
And I think that when you put them in a row you maybe should consider mixing them up so the twin berries wouldn't be next to each-other (it has a not so nice effect for me)

send this ASAP

love clueberry, they are original

I really like your design and I think the berries are awesome. very original and great design. I especially like how the glasses glow in the dark. thats cool. great work!!!

Thanks again for your feed back on my design.

I think its done :D nice

Look the new versiion of killer apple

Very nice work -submit right away!! Would you help me with one of my tees?
Toxic Waste Kills Teletubbies
or
Wut?

submit ~

thanks for you feedback : )

Thank you for your comment on my tee :)
Toxic Waste Kills Teletubbies
Uploaded version 2 now :D

Let me know when you submit or update. Also, have you gotten a chance to check out my design thats up for voting now Just a Bee Bear? thnx.

i just did futurology ;) of course ;)

I really like the square design... very nice. I'd say submit this puppy. :)

I like the main idea, but i think it would be better if you integrate them as a single thing. But, anyway, it's a nice design. :)

READY TO SUB!!

just updated mine on a real tee, check it out
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85630/Love

as u can see on the 3rd slider in the upper right corner, i already have designs with every berry itself ;)

Cool !!!
I just wonder if you could make Mat H. Berry and Crack Berry look a bit more different... looks like ti's the same drawing with just a change of colors. Maybe the glasses or the leaves could make a little more difference between them to make every nerd-berry more unique...
Very nice design

[ooops] when I wrote "ti's" I meant "it's"...
By the way, thanks for your advice on my paper wars!!!

mat .h and crack are the twins ;)

hellow schatten105 :D i have some update could you check it and give some comment :D nice :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85354/shout_it_out

Woah. i'm absolutely respectful of how you take the time to improve your design step by step after heeding the different advices from the community. The progression is huge and i think it's really cool! Submit away!

Btw, thanks for your critique! my design is already up for submission!
SLURPPY

hi, I love these...

flowberry.....16
crackberry.......10
mathberry.......1
clueberry...11


Please critique my new version:)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85874/afraid_of_my_own_eye#v3

Cool, I like the glow in the dark effect!!!
1.Crackberry
2.mathberry
3.flowberry
4.clueberry

My Design is up for scoring plz vote

I like the layout of the four from the first slide in the flash presentation.

the sub will have the arangement of the first slider in this V.. in only waiting for the answer from threadless, how i shall sub the berry-collection... i hope next week i can sub ;)

submit, its rly cool.
please comment on mine, i've altered it
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86343/Nipple_Tashles
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85552/Warrior_s_Dance

The four berries in a row are great - so much better than the last version I saw (version 3). It looks awesome on the green background. Submit :)

sweet pretty funny
sub it

please comment on mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/86328/Fish_Food

i agree with tallbob , definitely the ones in a row :)

i like the first slider too. Gotta make sure I make the vote on this.

My threadcauses submission is up, and I really put a lot of thought into it so plz check it out HEREt thanks.

Perfect!! I still love the glow in the dark tees!! thabks for all you said about my design!! Umm, I hate to say this - but it's been submitted, if you wanna have a look?
http://www.threadless.com/submission/329387/Yeti_version_3/showmore,designs

Please, submit this :)

I really like the effect of highlight in the dark !

I submit Invisbleman, Can you score it? I appreciated your comment on it before ;)

The Nerdberries are ready to vote, pls help me