This is design for the Oceanic Preservation Society Contest. Let me know your thoughts!

Nice one, I think you should lower the lone piece at the top a little bit, also I don`t know if you really need the specie gone words there!!!

Plz check mine if you have a minute

wow... I really like the concept you have here... with each winning line an animal gets extinct :O

I think the upper panda piece might be to high... and maybe work a little bit more on the polar bear, is that a polar bear? the white one? make it easier to recognize. Aside form that it's looking good :)

This is really cool! I love the artwork and the placement. I think maybe you should lower the piece at the top though. Check out my subs origami heartbreak and star moose (elk actually)

lower that top one and this looks great. really clever. thoughts on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85637/Ebonies_and_Ivories

Ok, in this version I have lowered the panda on top, eliminated the words "Species Gone!" words and worked on the polar bear. Thanks guys for your comments...

What do you think?

I really like this the only thing I would suggest is moving the design down just a smidgen just a little bit. For me it feels a little awkward with the panda right under the collar

it's a rly smart idea, i love designs with a Pro-Nature background

well done

It is a very nice idea, a very interesting style.

I like the idea with the message.

The Last Hero
Thanks:)

very interesting idea, and execution, i really like it, personally i would match the brown colour to the score frame instead of the green, aesthetically, it might serve you better to have a different colour than that green. Maybe not as a design in general, but on a t shirt. rather than that i love it

here is mine, check it out if you have a minute: http://www.threadless.com/critique/85630/Love

Tiger shouldn't be the only one with colors. So I would make another animal in color or cut tigers.

Interesting ideas on the color section. I'll think about it! Thanks guys!

On V.3 I have added a new animal (Cheetah) which helps on the color stability. Also changed the Score panel color to Orange, to win a color for the cheetah. Finally I moved the panda just a bit lower. What do you think??

I like the concept. Good stuff!

Death at the lunch hour

Do something with the top of the image as tetris was always bordered or had a line at the top im pretty sure. but great work

Nice concept!

Nice concept!

I like the idea and the message! I played tetris one hour ago ! :)

Well played with the dodos ;)

watch mine

love the idea and the style! and i'm trying to figure out how the last piece would fit perfectly...

so cool!!

i dont think you need the clouds and the row in the bottom

but great work!! the cubic animals are fantastic

I'd probably get this shirt if it got through. How did he do the click to see it on a shirt?

Check out mine if you desire
camel games

Really sweet design. Odd placement for the "click" up at the top and I would be interested to see your placement on a tshirt. Would it be the entire shirt? or just a central box on the shirt?

I also agree with tomilee. Not feeling the clouds.

I'm lovin this. I don't think its there yet, i thinkyou need some minor changes that will go a long way. First off, the text on the right side doesn't make that much sense.

Here is what I suggest: Change "next extinct" to "next species or next animal". And take off "last extinct".

Keep "extinct animals" for the score. Change "player us" to "Poucher 1" or "Player 1"

Also, the score and the number of lines don't match, I don't play enough to know what it should be.

Hope that helps, this is a tee id like to wear.

I think it's ironic! I like!

i would change the font to this style
http://gadgetophilia.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/tetris.gif

i totally love the idea!! though i agree with taking out the clouds and animals at the bottom :DD

this design would make sense if all the animals stacked up were extinct animals. Think about it...

Great concept!!! its real clever and funny lol. I think you should leave the clouds and the animals on the bottom out of the design. I think your design will work well without it. I really like your design. i cant wait till its done. great work!!!

Thank you for your comment on my design
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

I really appreciate it

Wow, great design. I'd love to see it printed (I'd wear it). But, I don't know, futurology ... I think the point is to draw attention to endangered animals that will become extinct. So, the design is supposed to be a criticism of how we humans toy around with animal life to the point of extinction.

Hmminteresting i hadn't thought of it like that, yeah i guess im in the minority, i was trying to preserve the literal aspects of the tetris game in my head.

oh yeah and I could use some critique if you have a chance, thnx tooting stars

Ok just keep away the information of Player, Level all that boxes and left the design, because the design speak by itself. Enlarge the animals square.
If you want Green Dog

awesome idea!!! how bout larger the design into A3 maybe..
then, go for it! SUBMIT!!!

please feedback mine too..
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85631/POP_and_AWARENESS

AWESOME IDEA...tell us when is up!

If you have time comment and vote my KILL THE TIGER

I like this, especially the to be extinct and last extinct part at the side xD

By the way, if you have a minute, check out mine :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85730/Heartbroken

the first version had some of the same animal next to each-other maybe you could put 2 of something somewhere?

it's great already, just that the 2 chimpanzees caught my eye.

Ok, for V.4 I have changed few things upon request that made sense to me.

1.Eliminated the explosion effect on the bottom of the design and moved it all the way down.
2.Added a bald eagle to help a little more on the color combination as well as on the animal selection.
3.Changed the font type to something more similar to the original game style.
4.Eliminated the "extinct animals" words under score and changed "Next to extinct" to "next species".
5.Also changed "player:1" to "poacher:1"
6.and last but not least, added few levels and lines as well.

Thank you so much for all your comments and ideas. They are helping a lot on the final design!

What are you thoughts about V.4?

Maybe make a space on the final row where the panda could fit and finish that row, this could show that they're nearly extinct. Just a thought. Looks really good btw.

Have a look at mine if you want to

camel games

Bump...

this really looks great!!! I also love the placement of what it looks like as a shirt. great work!

I just updated my design so please let me know what you think of the new version. I could really use your help and feedback. Thank you so much.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

so cool, my favorite version. I really tried to think of feedback, but this looks about ready to sub. I dont play enough tetris to know, but maybe you should find out what a realistic score level and lines should be?

i really like what you've done in your first shirt "Species Gone", it gave a sort of political/social meaning to it to the concept i really liked.
Anyway even without is not bad but i will try a way to re use it!
;)

Can you help with my score?
-HERE!-

It is deep, important and fun. Really cool and I like it alot. I think it looks ready, really good job. Could u pls give me some brutally honest feedback? http://www.threadless.com/critique/85944/In_the_eye_of_the_beholder

ah, see u added some more animals...very cool
it's absolutely ready to submit i think

i've updated my critiques, if u wanna view: The

Nerdberries, give peace a chance

Very awesome idea, I agree ready to submit.

Thanks for your comment on mine.

Hahahaha awesome concept :D

Check mine :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85789/Jellyfish

))) It's cool! And I see progress in work. I think it's ready!) Thanks for comment of "Love is...".

Cool design! Submit it.
Thanks for your comment for my work:)

:D interesting idea!! I like this version better.

Thanks for your comment :D

Cool! this is the best version for me, i think that placement should be a bit down on the tee, rectangular shape with more animals it's better than a squareshape, the rest it's realy cool. After that submit this!!

this is truly awesome! I think it's ready to submit!

I think its ready!!! Let me know when you are going to submit it so I could vote for you.

P.S thanks again for your comment on my design I really appreciate it.

I just updated my design so please let me know what you think of the 2 new versions. I could really use your help and feedback. Thank you so much.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

ready to sub
just update mine
check it out if you have minute
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85630/Love

cool! submit its! like the concept. thanks for comment on my design.. :p

i think you are ready to submit

good luck

let me know when u sub so i can vote for you

if you have time. can you help me with my design? http://www.threadless.com/critique/85550/Hipo_dots

Thanks for your comment on my design!

I. Love. This. What a phenomenal concept; I'm also a sucker for designs that have a good message (especially when it comes to raising awareness about biodiversity and species that are in danger of becoming extinct).

The design is great; my only real suggestion is to work on the placement... I really wish the animal blocks were bigger so that I could really relish the detail, but I know you want that text on the right to be legible (since it's a huge part of the message). I'm not sure if you could simplify it any, but I feel like the blocks are not getting the attention they rightfully deserve.

I know you're trying to mimic the layout of Tetris, but maybe if you moved that text below the blocks and then enlarged everything it might allow more space for your design to really shine? Just a suggestion... you can always give it a try and see how it looks!

Nice work!

Great design. If you could, I would make the tetris pieces larger. Please show placement on a tee, because I'm worried that it won't be as clear smaller.

Check out mine:
Rebuild the World
Listen
Float Away

Awesome design! But maybe try a different placement on the shirt? Maybe lower?

Oh and could you please tell me your opinion on The Amazing Motorbears? Thanks...

As i said, looks ready to sub. Let me know when you do!

I'd appreciate it if you'd take a sec to check out my latest sub Justin Bee Bear

oh my gosh, I do so love this motive.. I'd like to play it right now.
But the placement on the Tee I think is a little strange.. Though I cannot tell you how to change it.
But the motive is so totally ready to sub!

Could you check out mine maybe?
rock the prudence

great concept!!!
I really like it!
I would only move it more to the bottom of the tee and, perhaps add some more lines to make it less square.
Other it looks ready to submit!


If you had the time IŽd appreciate some critique on my Jumping Jack Flash.

Very good design, only a suggestion i don't like the font of write.But overall is an original idea.
If you want, hlep with mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86089/doodling

I like it. The gorilla is awesome.

Please be so kind and tell me your opinion on my "Han Deckard"-design, too. Thank you.

For V.5 I made some arrangements on the size and placement. For that I had to change even the model on the mock up. I added three more lines in lower section and moved it all the way to the bottom of the tee. I'm almost ready to submit this shirt, I'm just not sure about the final placement. What do you humans think??

PS: I put the shirt first this time. To see the artwork click anywhere on the image.

For V.5 I made some arrangements on the size and placement. For that I had to change even the model on the mock up. I added three more lines in lower section and moved it all the way to the bottom of the tee. I'm almost ready to submit this shirt, I'm just not sure about the final placement. What do you humans think??

PS: I put the shirt first this time. To see the artwork click anywhere on the image.

definitely liked V4 best, I just don't wear tees with such expansive graphics. If you didnt get a chance to yet, please vote on my 1 day young submission. thanks.

I loved ...but I think like futurology.. I dont wear tees with such expansive graphics.

Woweee! This is rather amazing haha! very imaginative, well done!

Very funny idea!! I dont know what more you can do to improve the design...
Would you mind comment on my tee??
Toxic Waste Kills Teletubbies

I think it is perfect that way. I'll give you 5 stars as soon as it is submitted.
thank you for your comment ;)

V4 is much better in my opinion...try a lighter tee...cream or sth like this

i've updated my critiques, if u wanna view: The Nerdberries, give peace a chance

I love it like this I hope you submit it soon.

I hope you submit soon as well!
It's cool with rettangular shape! maby position it's too low, design should be better uncut by the tee ;)
Did you try to put orange fonts on left sleeve?

the idea is very cool, but there is something that not convince me, about the outline of the animals, probably is the grey color, you could try to do an outline with the same color of the animal but darkest. Actually also the outline on the font black is too heavy...I wish that helps you...

too crowd for me but maybe it just design style but i love your detail :D

oh i have some update can you give some comment and sugest ? :D love to have it :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85354/shout_it_out

If you make the design a bit smaller on the tee, it will be fine, imo!
I wonŽt put it completely on the bottom, just lift it a little.

Ok, I'm debating about sticking with V.4 or go with V.7. I need your opinion on this one guys!
I'm about ready to submit, I just need to decide on this last detail.

Thanks much! ;)

Again I have to say that I like your concept and design a lot. It is creative and original. I understand you are debating to go with V4 or V7. I'm sorry I must ask, what is the difference between V4 and V7 again? I'm sorry I just cant see the difference. Overall though I like all of your versions and if I did have to choose I would go with V7. Despite not knowing the difference between V7 and V4, V7 looks a little cleaner than V4. Great work overall!!

P.S I just updated a new version of my design. I could really use your help and feedback before I submit it. Please let me know what you think. Thank you so much.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

My bad! I haven't explained the differences between this two versions. There are more lines on v.7 making it a little taller, also the score board is a little higher compared to v.4. So really they look very alike but is hard to decide which one to go for hehehe.

Please check also my other critique: ANIMA-PLANET. Comments and ideas are most appreciated. Thanks!

I like the shorter v.4 better :)

If you have time I'd appreciate some notes on my design "From Pain". Thanks and good luck with your design!

I sort of like v.7 better for some reason.

Very cool, nice design.

I think I prefer V. 7! Nice work!

I chose this version. It's the best I think.

hahahahaha! really nice! i like it!!

I would like to know your comments bout my work http://www.threadless.com/critique/86230/Fail_To_Prepare

I like V7 the best! Cool design!
Btw, take a moment to critique The Amazing Motorbears?

I'd say version 7. It's hard to see any big difference. Good luck with your submission.

The right part is totally unnecessary. Even without it you can get the idea that is a game. Also I'd use a bit smaller quantity of blocks, less is more.

I really like the Tetris-Zoo Smash up idea! Loving all the characters ^_^ Great work.

Maybe its true and u dont need the extra panel text there. The animals alone are awesome!

Nice, I like this version but I like v2 a little bit better!!!

Plz my D is up for scoring

For me V7 the best one!
it's more dynamic than v4, submit this!

I's choose V4 over V7 in that it makes more of an impact in fewer moves.

V7!

I like version 7! Great design.

If you have a moment I'd love to hear your thoughts on my works in progress:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/86018/Number_8_Dog

http://www.threadless.com/critique/86019/Space_is_the_Place

I like v.7...but better without panel...just the tetris blocks ;)

Ok I finally submitted it for scoring. Please vote and comment on it here: ANIMETRIS. Thanks!!

i will, pls vote mine too =)

The Nerdberries are ready to vote, pls help me

hmm.. the font doesn't help
it's hard to read =/
but great idea, save the animals!

take a look at my Zombie Brains from outter space

I like V4 better, nice idea!

Is there anyway you could make less blocky on the teeshirt perhaps but a rounded rectangle border around it or put the design the whole way down the shirt

Check out this!!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/86251/You_are_here