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Just a cookie in his favorite spot, YAKUSI!!
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great illustration!
i think you need to add more to the glass' shadow... it still feels a bit floaty on the tee... i love his expression! like his saying "awwwwww....." (but in a good way) :) Please show some love and score my design: Like Cats and Dogs And if you have the time, check out my critiuqe design: The Last Hero Thanks:) |
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oh thanks, you are right I gonna change that.
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may be add color for cookie?
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I like the concept and the glass of milk looks delicious. The cookies expression is great! My only critique is that the cookie should look more edible. The gradients and shadows on the cookie take away from the design rather than enhancing it.
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invisibleelement on Feb 25 '11 That's a fun concept. I agree with the comments above. You might also alter one of the hands, so they look a little more unique. Right now it looks like a copy / paste / flip along vertical axis.
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Perhaps you should use an other colour for the cookie
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Really realist your glass! nice!
I agree with coulemelle, the cookie will be better in brown ;) or if it's an "oreo" try to put him black and is drawing face line in white Good luck! If you have time, critique my new version of Invisibleman ps : sorry for my english |
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Cool Idea dude!
Love the glass rendering. The refraction shape should be more round though (it looks as if the glass were triangular) The cookie lacks of realism compared to the glass. Fine tune it a bit and you are gold! Comments on mine? ALL TOGETHER NOW |
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great idea...cool illustration...but try to improve the cookie...
Are there chocochips or stars in your cookie...a bit weird.... :) but all in all a very great shirt design please score my Dreamcatcher |
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NICE!!! I like design. I especially like the black shirt. cool design and nice work.
Please let me know what you think of mine. I could really use the help and some feed back. Thank you so much. http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo |
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Hey, I have submited Invisibleman, thanks for your advices, if you have time, can you score it. ?
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