buying some frogmen

awesome, submit, no advice to give

that's pretty funny. the highlights on the bag obscure the diver closest to the top, and the white highlights in the lower right corner look like a snow drift, back those off a bit, i think, and you're ready to go.

ha! great! sub it

The bow and the bag highlights are a bit much for me. Also it's too low, bring more attention to the scuba guys

What people above said. Also, maybe move it up a little? I'd feel better about wearing it if it was around my chest, not my stomach.

added some bubbles to the frogmen, and placed the fish bag a little higher on the tee. To enhance the idea of tranparancy, I've tweaked the shine, and made the frogmen a little visible through the shiny parts.

definately an improvement on the shine of the bag. can't see the bubbles though. i liked it lower, i thought it gave a kinda bottom heavy look to the bag, but i guess majority rules

thanx for the comments so far.

put the design a bit more to the middle, and lightened the bubbles from the three frogmen (still small, but clearly visible up close)...

so this is it? ready to sub i think :-)

maybe a fin grabbing the bag...Just a thought

or like fish looking on

i think its pretty good as it is. u can play around with adding background as suggested though, but only include if it does actually improve the image

sub now

cute idea :)

the frogmen are being subbed as we speak :-) it's in the list.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/137715/fishy_business/showmore,designs

this design already been subbed, but this is an upgrade :-)



because in the sub i got some comments about copy/pasted divers, they were right, so i've used three different ones.



the idea is still going strong and i want to take a 2nd change at the sub.

a 2nd chance that is....

Much better I think. I'm a fan of the chest placement, and I like the darker blue shirt.

The top guy looks awkward to me for some reason. I think it's his arms. I like the bottom left guy a lot.

Good use for plastic bags, I like it.

Looking great. Chest placement thumbs up. One looking out at us my fave.



Bow? I know it is artistic licence but usually they rubber band 'em when they bag em up. That detail may stick in the craw of aquarists (to whom this design may appeal)



More likely to buy if options beside blue were offered.



Luv it! Congrats

@wish-ga: bow?

they've giftwrapped it ;-)

i think the scuba-diver-bag looks best on one of these shirt colors.



any idea if threadless accepts a second posting on the sublist?



version 3 didn't make it (2.7/5), but this current version is much better.. with the unique divers and all... hope they'll accept it.

i liked the placement in the corner a lot more. but this version is definitely better than #3 so i hope they accept it. goodluck!

good point about the placement in the corner. you're right.

it got accidently deleted when i changed the shirt colors.

corner placement is back :-)

Well done, and nice presentation!

instead of black, i used a real dark blue for the scuba divers.

finally it's ready for sub now :-)

Looks good to me and I love the idea. nice work, send it!

i'd make a big fish with it in the hand :D cute cute :)

Great work. Brings back a lot of childhood memories.

I'd buy it. Cool concept well executed.

^^can't hope for more than that^^

bottom right placement (as it's worn) with a large goldfish near the left shoulder (please don't anthropomorphize)

Your submission has been declined because it's a duplicate. Unfortunately, we don't allow resubmissions of a design that has only been slightly changed. Even if your modifications were based on comments of the original design, we still treat it as a duplicate.

so, end of story for "fishy business" at threadless :-(

it's a pity... thanx anyway for all the comments and suggestions!

that's too bad. i like it.

look cute.