I take the old fashion way to send a message through ocean and i apply that with the modern way to send a message now, through a cellphone. I combine both.

the idea is good.. you can add more effects to the water i think...

mind critique my design caught in the fibonacci spiral

This is a good idea, I agree about adding more effects to the water. Looks good on both the blue tees.
I'd appreciate feedback on my design

I saw something like this here, but your version is better. So good luck.

I improve the version and i did the water to a better look

thanks for the opinion

thanks for the opinion

Ha ha. i like this. maybe more keys to the phone (like a full keyboard)

also remove the gradient on the cork (it doesnt match the rest of the design

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TromBone

Oh Boy!

I agree with armored, a more cartoony cork might look better, maybe if it stuck out more so, more like a wine bottle cork? if that makes sense... I like the idea, but I think a full keyboard might make the idea pass more easily, or maybe if the phone didn't slide out at all it might look good as well. I like the shirt on the darker color as well, it makes the water stand out more that way. Great idea, can't wait to see what else you do with it (if anything)

If you have the time I would love a critique!
Listening to Earth

a better version

crazyyyy jajjaaj bravisimo I like it

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Green Dog

The concept is strong and clear in your design but I feel it needs a little something to make it pop. The design is a bit sterile. Maybe try playing with the look of the water give it more detail try adding swirls and ripples to it.

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awesome. the ripples however need some more work. (particularly the large light blue patch)

It is a really great concept though :)


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