A fun idea about snowflakes, the science behind them, and their effect on students and people in general who would prefer to stay in bed on cold nasty days.

holy shit this is awesome... sorry.... couldn't contain my excitement.. sub!

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Thanks!

wow...nice work. I really like it! I love the detail and though that obviously went into this design. I think I have a piece of "Lethargoid Recticle" permenantly stuck in my brain and won't melt.....lol.

If you have time, I would love to hear what you think of my design

I've never seen anything quite so text heavy on Threadless that had such a good reason for it!

Something is not jibing for me on the title caption. It's either the font, or it's The Use of Title Case, I'm not sure which. Possibly both. Otherwise, I think it's pretty great.

Wow so awesome! Great use of text and the sort of electronicy? feel of it! I would easily say sub it it is ready!!!!!!

This is amazing. If I had to change something I'd just put the snow-flake center with the descriptions around it.

That is a beautiful snow flake

Yes, tight infographics ftw! I like the concept and the execution, just wondering what other typeface you could use for 'The Science of Snowflakes" Or do you not intend to have it printed on there?

hahahahahahahaa
very fun!!!
submit!

Wow this awesome!!!! Submit!!

Check my design please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/84438/phoenix_rising

I really LOVE the color you used :D

Tho i think the title "The science of snowflakes" could be smaller at the side :) so it doesn't steal the attention :D

if you have the time, can you please comment on my latest Popsicle Love Design :) ?

this shirt should glow in the dark!
not too fond of the "the science of snowflakes" words though.
i think its a bit about the placement, cause i'm not sure if i can point out anything unsuitable about the font.

yes, your title looks off. I say just kill it completely. The rest of it looks pretty sweet, and your text is funny. I'd be tempted to make the snowflake a tad bigger and move the text bits around a bit, otherwise it's cool :)

Get rid of the title, use the extra space to play around with the placement of the flake and the text, and you're onto a winner. The rest is ace.

Care to look at mine?

I like the title. I can't think of anything I would change.

I'd love feedback on mine...

cool. ditch the title on the tee though. its not needed.

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that's great. what should I say about, I don't know. But I just say Sub this.

Plz check it

Thanks for all of the comments and suggestions guys. I'm definitely in favor of taking out the title in the design. Frankly, I'm not sure why I have it in there. I suppose I forgot I was designing for Threadless.

I'm planning on experimenting with some other fonts for the rest of the text, but readability is top priority since the text will be so small.

I'm also planning on adjusting the placement of some of the text blocks and the design overall.

Thanks again for the feedback. : )
V2 should be up this weekend.

This is great I like it, you have me vote!!!

Plz check mine if you have a minute!!!

Alright guys, thank you again for your wonderful feedback. Here is V2 with changes.

I scrapped the title completely.

Swapped the font of the rest of the text in favor of a more techy one. I like it, but let me know if you think readability will be an issue.

Reworded and fixed some grammar/spelling errors.

Adjusted leading and tracking of text.

Adjusted spacing of the design as a whole. Namely the layout of the text blocks and their distance from each other.

Minute changes on the strokes (rounded caps and corners).

New presentation background and minor adjustments on the flash presentation (mouse position, and preloader)

Let me know what you think of V2!

this is really cool looking, but I am not totally sold on it being on a black shirt. Have you tried a dark grey or other dark color?

Print Is Dead comments/suggestions appreciated

Good thought. I had actually entertained the idea of different shirt colors, but I wasn't sure if the design would stand out enough. Perhaps the color of the design will have to change as well.

I hate it when people click "Don't Submit" without any helpful feedback.

I think, though, I'm going to put this one the back-burner until next winter. I feel like it will have a better chance around December. On to one my other ideas!