hehe. i dig the concept which is the main thing. the guy could use some work on proportions...he's not bad though and you may have wanted it this way for all i know. his head/mouth looks strange i'd definitely work on that a bit. i love how he's rubbing up against the truck that's great.
pedro23. just... stop commenting. its better that way. dude, thise is a great idea. i hve a feeling it would come out better hand drawn just cuz the angle ur going for with the car and the dude, etc. might be hard to execute on a comp. also, dont have him biting the side of the car, have him like, with the hood open or something, looking for blood or idk, just the side of the car isn't particularly interesting and i think u can do better. lastly, 3 colors isn't an accomplishment in my book. its saying i don't feel like using all 5. try and use 5 for a stronger design.
agree with the teeth comment. the jaw of the guy looks a bit odd being so squared off like that. it looks like that's what you were going for, but to me it looks strange. i think it's becaus the rest of his body isn't done in the same square fashion. the car position i actually liked better in the first one. dang sorry for all these fix it comments, it's still hilarious though and really the changes are pretty quick fixes.
agree with the teeth comment. the jaw of the guy looks a bit odd being so squared off like that. it looks like that's what you were going for, but to me it looks strange. i think it's becaus the rest of his body isn't done in the same square fashion. the car position i actually liked better in the first one. dang sorry for all these fix it comments, it's still hilarious though and really the changes are pretty quick fixes.
what do you think?