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this is one I did a while back, but I think it works for a T
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This is really good! only thing i'd say is just make the background clearer, or if you want it to look like that, change it so its a little bit darker?
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Cool design, I like it a lot. Only thing I can think of to improve is perhaps the stars. The larger, more obvious stars all seem to be in vertical lines, maybe you could scatter them a bit?
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this is really sweet - can only say what others have though - the stars need work - make them closer and more random in sizes and place. great design!
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So cute! I would refine the trees and bushes in the background. Critique mine?
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Awww this is cute! I really like the colors of the elephants, but I think you should try different colors for the background. Just a suggestion!
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I'm with Futurology,
The lightsource is not coming from the bulb, you should try giving more emphasis on that. Either by darkening the elephants, or by making the light a lot brighter. I think the stars should be a little more scattered as well. Other than that I love it!! It's a very cute, simple and straightfoward design! I'm sure it'll be easily printed! Anyway, Would you mind giving me a quick scoring on my design? Only 3 days to go! if you have scored it already, I appreciate your time! Thanks! Score "I believe I can FLY" |
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Cool design. I think it could work without the stars. I like it though.
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