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SF Designs
SF Designs on Jan 29 '11
this is one I did a while back, but I think it works for a T
kmbcmsishgc
kmbcmsishgc on Jan 29 '11
This is really good! only thing i'd say is just make the background clearer, or if you want it to look like that, change it so its a little bit darker?

please take a look at mine? Night Sky
The Ducksta
The Ducksta on Jan 29 '11
Cool design, I like it a lot. Only thing I can think of to improve is perhaps the stars. The larger, more obvious stars all seem to be in vertical lines, maybe you could scatter them a bit?

Please look at mine. :)
Phyde
Phyde on Jan 29 '11
Looks fantastic! Ducksta is right about perhaps scattering the stars around.

And I'm wondering if those are eyes in the bushes in the background? They (At a first glance) kind of look like the wings of flies, maybe try making them brighter?

Looking great anyway :D
true fiction
true fiction on Jan 30 '11
this is really sweet - can only say what others have though - the stars need work - make them closer and more random in sizes and place. great design!

Please give me a hand with my hail to the thief and
Same shit - new day
Sparklicious
Sparklicious on Jan 31 '11
So cute! I would refine the trees and bushes in the background. Critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/82941/Love_Letter_From_Russia

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Futurology
Futurology on Jan 31 '11
like this a lot. stars placement is cool, and the illumination effect is nice. it doesn't completely feel like the scene is being lit by the light thou...anyone else feel that way? also, maybe thickening the bushes?
Lyysander
Lyysander on Feb 01 '11
Awww this is cute! I really like the colors of the elephants, but I think you should try different colors for the background. Just a suggestion!

Drop me a critique maybe?
ellygeh
ellygeh on Feb 01 '11
I'm with Futurology,

The lightsource is not coming from the bulb, you should try giving more emphasis on that.

Either by darkening the elephants, or by making the light a lot brighter.

I think the stars should be a little more scattered as well. Other than that I love it!! It's a very cute, simple and straightfoward design! I'm sure it'll be easily printed!

Anyway,

Would you mind giving me a quick scoring on my design? Only 3 days to go! if you have scored it already, I appreciate your time! Thanks!

Score "I believe I can FLY"
fiftiesjay
fiftiesjay on Feb 01 '11
Cool design. I think it could work without the stars. I like it though.

Give me a vote if you have a sec, thanks
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