Popsicle love, thought of it as a couple design but i think threadless doesn't allow that do they?rnrnThought it could still use some tweaking. :)

Maybe on a light yellow shirt, the white looks plain, but I LOVE the concept :)

Throw some drop shadows down below them so theyre not just floating on the shirt; it'll ground them and make for a more dynamic composition. Great design over-all, though, good work.

Check out my design "DAWN OF THE BROS" if you like, i'd appreciate the feedback.

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nice, I agree about the light yellow shirt suggestion!!!!

it took me a while to figure out that they had hands. Maybe you could make them more obvious?

Hey thanks for the comment on my design. I was a little bit confused by the hands also, and maybe changing the color pink on either the heart or the girl popsicle by a slight bit would help. It would also be neat to tie a "melting for you" type of theme into it. Overall though, very nice!

Thanks for all the comments guys :) I will try out the new stuff and new version would probably be up by today :)

super cute design, should try out light yellow. even if threadless wouldn't print a pair of tees, I would like to see what they would look like on separate shirts

Ahahaha so cute!! I think you're ready to submit, but try putting the design on a better shirt template. You can find very good ones if you search "Threadless template" on Flickr. think this would look awesome on a blue!

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Its cute ! It would look good, on a yellow t shirt .

I love the couples concept--as you can see here! Better Together (thanks for your support!)

Good luck with this. I think it's a nice start. What's the blue dot on the bottom left there?

I agree that you should try on a yellow shirt, and also that you should make the hands more obvious. Other than that great design.

Give me a Vote, if you have a sec.

Cute design. But to me the lines above the mouth on the pink popsicle looks like a mustache. Might just be me though. Nicely done.

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Stars Always Have To Work The Night Shift

Thanks guys for the great comments, tried a variety of the suggestion. Added some shadow for it, and did 2 version. Cream and Yellow. Which one you guys think is better :)

I tweaked the hand a little not a major changes. Any suggestion how i should make the hand more obvious?

What would it look like without hands at all? Just curious.

I like it better on the yellow shirt and I think the shadows have added depth. The blue balls (hands?) by the blue popsicle are a little awkward. I also agree that the lines over the mouth of the pink popsicle look kind of like a mustache. Very Cute concept.

Very cute. I prefer cream over yellow.

I, too, would be quite curious to see what it would look like without the hands.

Other than that, great design. :D

Cute design! :) The yellow compliments the pink and the blue

i vote for yellow, looks like superman icecream colors

i guess yellow does compliment the colors :)
I'll try remove the hands and have a look at the effect :)
will tweak the blushes abit.

It's so CUTE !

I like the soft brown... but there will be a lot of people who like the yellow...

Took away the hands and added some new elements into the design so the love doesn't seem to be floating :)

Tweaked the blush.

What you guys think :) ?

So cute! I think the blush looks much clearer and the whole thing looks cleaner without the hands. I can't think of anything that needs changing. Submit! Critique mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/83870/Groupie_Chicks

This looks much better!
I thought the blue one was a girl and the pink was a boy because the blush looked like a mustasch before :) Hehe. I agree with Sparklicious, It's much cleaner without the hands.
My only thought is that the print might look a bit big on a "real" tee. But I could be wrong :)

I do like this very cute but what is the bumb on the girl popsicles head???

not a fan of pastel colours. Try adding some drips, like he's melting for her. Or the puddle could be the heart?
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The design on the yellow shirt looks awesome. Maybe add a darker color for shading. Can't wait to see what it looks like on a model.

This is fantastic. I love it without the hands. And yellow definitely gets my vote. Great job!

Critique my latest version?

seems like it needs more work...

Awesome design.

I like the idea of the blue one, melting nervously for her. It would play up the Popsicle idea.

Can try to make the girl popsicle into slimmer, or more curvaceous shape, give it more femininity. Other than that, good work.

BTW, please help to comment on my Fighting Warriors. Thx.

This shirt is very cute. Good work =)

Check out mine?
Always Flying

With Color

Cute! :D

Please critique mine

throw it on a template and submit!!!
check out my crit, Winter Birds

Thanks for the awesome comments and suggestion guys, i will try shaping the pink popsicle abit as suggested and perhaps melting the blue to see the impact :)

Thanks guys, took your comments and advices and tried a few things, i tweaked the shape of the pink popsicle, made the blue one melt (kinda suck at it) but i came out with 3 version, i somehow prefer the drip 2 cause it has some dimension to it.

What you guys think? Or is the previous version better?

Drip 3.
This is by far the best version. I do think the girl looked better in v3 with no curves but that's just me. Otherwise a big improvement.
Good job!

Check out my latest update of you have time
http://www.threadless.com/critique/83816/They_started_it

Either drip 2 or 3 is good.

Love the drips in this version, drip 2 or 3

Drip 2 is my favourite, then I think if you used the girl popsicle from version 3 it would be finished!

drip 2 works best for me.
and i think you should try out creating the shadows under the popsicles in a direction.
you know, like with both shadows going 2 o'clock for example, instead of them being just directly beneath the popsicles. make it look for realistic.

and uhm if you're free, i'd love criticisms here at my critique

I think I like Drip 3 the most. The idea of the shadows at an angle instead of straight on seems like it might work too.
And even though it was freezing in my apartment this morning, I really want a popsicle right now...

I like drip 3 the best. the drops just add to the picture i think.

Could you critique mine if you have a chance?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84155/Thermosphere

i actually ran into this before you find my design, Winter Birds. I said submit it, but I would do two more things first.
1) The bottom drip is the same in each drip series. I think your design would be more effective at first glance if you actually changed the drip shape of each series. Maybe even add a small puddle in the second and a growing puddle in the third.
2) The design would look cleaner and better without the text.

One more thing I just thought off before you submit:
#) Place it on a model

Ready for sub, generally.

I like Drip 2 most. Two nips in Drip 3 are too much and seem too symmetric to me...

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Number 3 for sure. I agree with shamouza on the point that you should possibly add a small puddle beneath him. Also the image hasn't got a sense of direction with the shadows being directly underneath both. Apart from that loving it, adorable.

Drip 3!
I love the blue one melt. It seems like he's totally in love..very cute :D

I like the first one personally, a lot of others say 3, and that's good too. This oughtta go to print

drip three!

Drip 3 too, the angles of the blue popsicle made me think about a link textshy guy hair style and the melting effect made me think he's so nervous to date the pink popsicle that he melt. I really like it.

Also, if you have time to critique my design, I would really appreciate it. Thanks and good job!

I personally love drip 3, it is very adorable. It's makes look like he is melting because she is so hot and beautiful to him. I thought the shadow at an angle was a good idea but I like the shadows the way there are as well. I like the shirt color! If you don't mind critiquing my design that would be awesome!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84262/Rainbow_Zebra

Thanks for your comments on mine! I like drip 2 the best and I would use the girl popsicle from v3. Then submit!

Thanks guys for the comments, i guess i will use V3 pink popsicle and drip 3 version, will put it on a model and try tweaking the shadow abit (btw the shadow are casted that way because the light is coming from the head's position :) )

I vote for drip3, good work!!!

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here too

Neat design! I like drip3! :)

if you have time, Please score and comment on my submitted design! :)

awesome design so cute, i like drip 2! please comment and score my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/84117/80_s_Glamour

drip 3

Drip 3. It would be cool if on the back of the shirt the blue is completely melted and it's just a puddle in a heart shape with the stick.
http://www.threadless.com/submission/322273/Artys_Lady

Thanks guys for all the great comments on helping me improve this design. I think this would be my final and also the one i will be using to submit, presentation :)

Anything you guys still think should be improved on :) ?

still think you should make the drip into a heart, and loose the thought bubble.

Thanks for your feedback

Very Cute. I think this will work well for a final to send in. Nice work!

Check out the resubmition of my design @
Fluid Motion

Thanks.

oh sorry SF, i kinda forgot bout your suggestion! will take it in :)

I like it! It is very girly and kiddish and works well. Good job. Maybe make the top corners of the blue one look like a little more natural melting down because it kind of looks like bite marks unless that is what you were going for. Good job!

I'd like to see it with the drip heart too. I like the heart bubble, but I'd have to see both before I could decide. It's cute though.
One thing I might suggest would be to exaggerate the blue fellow's mouth a bit more. It looks fine up close, but from a distance it sort of looks like a straight line, which could make him look sad. Not a major issue, the heart aspect helps.

Thanks for the comment :)
I think this presentation is good. You can se the design and placement and everything very well.
I think the print is a bit big, but it might be just me.
Anyways. I think it's good as it is, but I can't really picture the drip heart idea...
Good job!

I like the design! I like the idea of making the drips into heart shapes. Just speaking as a girl, I wouldn't wear the shirt do to it's placement.....(It's right over the breast area). Which would look very unflattering on me and for many other girls, maybe have it in a different place on the shirt.

@Orange is right.
That's why i think you should try making a bit smaller :)

Hey thanks for the comment on mine! I commented on this one a few days ago and since then it looks ten times better for sure! I see you made the boy melt and got rid of the hands all together, which solves the only problems people were having with it. I'd say try the drip heart idea since it might be a simpler way to get the message across. But the presentation looks really good, color choices are awesome!

Looks good,
I kind of want to see with the drip heart too
I'd wear it as is though if you wanna leave it
Also, this seems like a pretty summer-esque shirt so i dunno if holding off on submission til then. i dunno, just a thought.

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weee very nice!! =D
loved the concept!!
ready to submit!

Do you mind voting please? =D
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Took the comments and advice from SF designs and tried the love puddle thing :) Not sure if you guys can tell, but it is made up of 2 love linked together and i can't decide if the second puddle or third puddle looks better :(

Now it is made up of 7 colors @_@

As suggested by Orange_Starshine89 about the girl's issue, made a few placement change. Could you guys kindly vote if you prefer 1, 2 or 3 for the design and 1, 2 or 3 for the placement? thanks :)

Hey, thanks for your comment!

I'd pick number 2 :-).

No.2 is optimal and good...

Please critique my design
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84089/BandAges

as in, you guys can pick the design and the placement :) like 2 for design 3 for placement or smthg like that :D

Hmm... Number 2 drip heart.
But I think that you might not need the other pink heart. You'll still get it. And if you take away the pink heart you could place them closer together and get a better placement on the shirt?
I think you need to put them closer together to make it look better on the shirt. maybe you could just change the position of the pink heart?
I like placement nr2 the best but i think it should be a bit higher up :)

id go with the design of #3 and placement of #2

Design #3 and Placement#2, with them being much smaller it wouldn't look awkward for me to wear. I really like it! I definitely think it will get printed!

If you have time please critique my work, I made some adjustments.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84262/Rainbow_Zebra

Also, with the heart drip I think you could leave the pink heart out.

Id go with design #3, placement #3 but size #2. I really like the shirt, good job. I say submit :P.

Also, I update my shirt so if you have any more feedbacks, it will really help me.

ooops...... :S, missing link :P

The Friendly Flower

for the design # 1 for placement...i like the size of # 2 but it should be up higher

i would go for design 3 (second choice 1) - 2 just looks odd after looking at 3.

and placement wise, i'd go for the second one, but at chest level instead.

the second size i mean, not placement

I like design 3 and placement 2

I agree with design 3 and placement 2. Awesome stuff.

Hi guys, thanks for all the great comments, been busy with chinese new year lately :) here's my newest update, used drip3 design , size 2 with placement higher up the chest. Now its just the love thing, do you guys think its better with or without :D ?

Thanks a bunch guys!

I like it... submit it.

Maybe have the pink popsicle melting a little as well.

Otherwise, great design! :)

I like it with the heart submit that one :)
I like that she makes him melt, it's really cute.


http://www.threadless.com/critique/84307/Old_birds_out_to_lunch

I def. think design 2 with the heart speaks more, awesome and cute :]

love the one with the heart, I'm sure everyone can relate to that melty feeling when you see your sweet heart ;)

Really nice and funny. But I'm not sure if the colour of the Tee-shirt is suitable... I mean, why yellow? Let's try to think what colour is suitable for LOVE? You did a great work with this one, though. Congratulations. :)

Really nice and funny. But I'm not sure if the colour of the Tee-shirt is suitable... I mean, why yellow? Let's try to think what colour is suitable for LOVE? You did a great work with this one, though. Congratulations. :)

I'd submit it as is for kids

its good..submit it..

The bottom one. this is uber cute!

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popsicle love! cute... submit it!!
anyway.. if u have time... can u critique mine....
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84529/aWw_The_Epic_Alpha_battle

submit:)

Number 2!
It looks cuter with the heart and the placement is great.
I think it's ready now :) good luck

If you haven't already, please comment and score They started it! Thanks

Tis has to be tha wurst desin ever. I son't get it and the heart makes it way to busy. I think mine is so much betr

plese take a look-
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84472/My_first_t_shirt

With heart delivers the message. Very cute and nicely arranged.

Design 1 all the way!! More impact. I love it. Submit!

Please critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84499/Bundlefly
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84500/Doll_Tunes
Thanks!

I will go with design 2!!!

plz check mine if you have a minute

here too

2 for sure!

I like design 1.

I'd love feedback on mine...

Thanks guys, i guess i'll go with design 2 since most of you guys prefer it :) any more?

thanks :) will inform :)

Okay guys, thanks for all the great comments helping me improve this design :) Here's the final version, anything else you guys think i should edit before i submit ?

Great! love it. Let me know when its up for score.
also thanks for the score :)

This is sooo great!!! Time to submit!

If you have a minute would you mind commenting on mine:
THOR-MOS

THIS. Submit THIS. It looks absolutely fantastic.

love it :)

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84562/Wave_on_Water

Adorable.

this is so sweet!
and very threadless like!
i think you can submit:)
If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my critique design: Like Cats and Dogs

Awesome design. Nothing closer to reality hehehe. Submit most def!

Please check my critique HERE. Comments or ideas most appreciated!

I love it! I think it looks great! Love the pastels.

I guess it is finished now and ready to go!

I also updated my design, please give feedback again ^^

nice one! :D love the colorssss

submit it! i'm sure it'll get printed!:)

Please show some love and score my designs:
Like Cats and Dogs
The Last Hero
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Definitely time to submit. Lookin fly.

Check mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/93119/So_Fly

Looks great :)
I would maybe more/broader highlights on the popsicles and put the shadows spreading away from them.
Looks pretty much ready to go, though.

Critique mine?

lol this is cute! Nice colors too. I would submit.

Please critique mine