Working with an idea i've had for years, this one needs a lot of work however. This is in the very beginning of the design so I need a lot of tips and suggestions on how to make it better and more complete. Along with this color scheme I also plan to do a black and white romero color scheme with the only color being red from the drippings of the mouth

nice drawing. Is that a brain in the bubble? Needs to look lke a brain

yeah supposed to be a brain

cool thanks...



fyi I'm keeping the brain small because dinosur brains aren't that big

not sure if that matters. its a cartoon after all. Though it works small. I just think it would work well larger too. Brains have a lot of detail. I think you need to be able to see the detail in order to process that ts a brain. I'm pretty sure no one will say hey dino brains are small wtf dude this is too big.

I guess i'm just saying you can tae creative liscense

take

fair enough...makes sense

i plan on cleaning up the speech bubble as well

i was planning on making it look all rugged like it is but i think it would look better if it was a standard speech bubble



besides the brain

what else, the lower part of the shirt doesn't really have much goin on

more zombisari ofcorse. zombies are pack creatures

they could have a collective thought bubble. All thinking the same thing.

more..hmm interesting

that could work, i was thinking about the design on the t-shirt and i do like the currently laout with one but i coould give a few more a try

you could just add some in the background like in a prehistoric setting maybe. or just add more heads

i'll play around with it

thanks for the comments and helping me out

i like it simple with just the one zombisaurus. he's pretty cute. agreed that the brain needs work. and his eyes? first he looks angry and second does he get pupils? i'd keep it simple. and i like this color scheme. cute and cartoony.

no pupils...i based the face design off of Resident Evil zombie's...

pupil-less, angry, and hungry



I'm glad you like the color scheme, these are so of my favorite colors...i want it to look very colorful and cartoony with a little bit of a dark tone behind the idea

here was a beginning version of the outline

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7104/zombisauruszl3.jpg

any more input before i start making changes?

cool dino.



i suggest to clean up the lines for the bubble. i know that's the look you were going for but it would look better if it flowed with the rest of the design.



the brain sort of looks like a butt. i'd give it more bumps.



and it needs something more like a background. maybe some smaller dinos running away or something.



good luck.

more zombisauri. :) please

I disagree with cleaning up the bubble. I like how it implies sort of ragged zombie-talk. In fact, make it more raggedy. Def work on brain. Otherwise, great!

I love the dino.... i can just imagine its "UrrrrggggHHH! Brwains!"



It mightbe a little big for them to print ... they told me 17" by 14" (inches)



Nice work!

too big? darn i didn't know about that

so.... if I want one.... even if its not the final design... how do I get one... Ill pay you whatever you want... because I freaking love this tshirt...



"brains?!"



I also agree that you should make more zombie dinosaurs... It's such an excellent combination...



I myself would enjoy a zombiesaurus Rex.

Alright, I modified it a ton since last time

anything?

I like the aesthetics of the design, but I'm not seeing the dinosaur as understood to be a zombie without the aid of the title. I'm trying to think of ways to make it more apparent, but right now I've got nothing. Critique my design too please http://www.threadless.com/critique/16579/elephanSTripes

Well, i like zombies. im a big fan. But, i dont see connection. A zombie dinosaur doesnt make much since.

i mean, it looks good. but the idea needs work

I love the illustration. I'm not sure if the concept will be accepted well here by the audience but it's worth a shot.

Zombies+Dinosaurs=excellent



Though i think it needs to be more rotted, to make it more zombie-ish

Rot would definitely be good. Think stinky.

Cool!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/16693/Welcome_to_Earth_Spaceboy