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comments plaese

very funny as in i like this but no doubt there'll b others who'll b wanting to give you a blow by blow as to how u might make improvements, however it goes, good luck should you sub it..; ]

thanks alote foxy...more comments please !

The text is too small on the cart, but otherwise very cute!

CHANGED TEXT

BETTER?

WHATS MORE?

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i would make it a creepier hand drawn font, or something like scholop.



and say "brain-scream"



but tahts just me.



so there's something real funny looking aobut that pattern on his sweater.



maybe it would look good if it the stripes were just masked inside of the shape?

The ice cream stand definitly helps the ice cream cone read brains, much, much better! I agree that the font should change, and impossiblejosh's idea for a title is cool! I'm liking this :)

diferent text + changed stripes shape and color

up for all!

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comments guyysss

comments please

i would quit the stand

changed the shirt!



comments please

Hey ! You went with occipital lobe flavor ! Cool ! You've put a massive smile on my face. The stand is brillant, just love the cartoon image with the brain missing. Stripes are better, text is better but still don't whether it's quite right. Although I'm thrilled you went with Lobe flavor it would make more sense to have brain (s)cream @ the top and then a flavors board @ the side . You could let your mind run riot, you know, Cerebellium & cherry, Grey matter chip, that sort of thing. I would so buy this shirt for my brother. This is sterling work.

ah ha ha ha ha sub now

sweeeeeeeeeet this rules.



LOVE the guy on the stand who's head is choppped in half.



only thing i can think of that might look better is the lettering on the stand, right now the rest of the design is really clean and that lettering looks a bit out of place to me. otherwise awesome.

so 3 options for the stand top letters



1.freez brain!

2.brain s-cream!

3.freez brain ice creams!



give your opinion please!!!

I'm going to side with brain s-cream. There are lots of variations you could do with that. Brains- cream, Brain scream etc etc

WHAT ABOUT THIS?

I scream for... BRAAAINNNNSSSS!!



..sorry



Maybe...

"FreezyBrainz I-Scream"



I like where it's going.

oh whoa



I was commenting on the last one... this came up fairly close

lol!

so brain freeze i-screams or FreezyBrainz I-Scream?

I'd stick with yours. Have you tried putting a shadow of another zombie in the background dishing them out? And maybe a line of more waiting?

but then ill have to do the all drawn smaller and that meens i lose alote from it! (and also i tried but its dont work mate)

what if the icon on the truch looked more like a person. Kinda looks more like something you'd see on a cross walk sign than on an icecream/braincream cart. The style that is

oh and what if you add more detal on the stacked cones. Show the diamonds. Give me diamonds!

i like where its come.

CHAMGED THE TEXT (I THINK ITS FINALE!)

ADDED DIAMONDS TO THE CONES ON THE STAND



COMMENTS PLEASE

one small thing you might want to do is do the same diamond pattern on the cone he has on his hand, less sporatic and more uniform



other than that i think it's great

CHANGED THE MAIN CONE 2!

good work i like it a lot

i'm a big zombie fan

wasn't this originally done without a stand? honestly i liked it better without it...or am i losing my mind and the stand was always there. hmmmm. oh well.

oh yeah baby! The cone look awesome!



This is the one.

cones

more opinions before im sendin' please?!

Yep, you've ironed out all the problems. Love the text BTW. Stand looks great. Time to unleash him on the nation(s).

I think someone ate spiderflux's mind, that cart has always been there...duhn duhn duhnnnn!

yep this is freakin sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. send it!