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backtozero
backtozero on Oct 06 '07
When the frenchman meets a naturalized immigrant.



Do I retain the All american potatoes or not?
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 06 '07
bmp
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 06 '07
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 06 '07
last bump.
Keter
Keter on Oct 06 '07
Is that supposed to be Perrier? Are they meeting in France or Burger King? ;o)
pearlaceoushecticity
pearlaceoushecticity on Oct 06 '07
i don't necessarily get all the details but i love it (i think its evian.)
theatreglory
theatreglory on Oct 06 '07
Neat!

I like the style.

Maybe make the contrast of French-American more obvius upon first glance!!

Other than that, really cool.
kalien
kalien on Oct 06 '07
the fries should say either on the box or in the bubble, warning I'm hot!
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 07 '07
I thought no one would give some feedback. thanks for giving some time!



yep, it's evian. :) Hmmm... how can I make the French-American contrast obvious at first glance? anysuggestions?



And oh, should I take off the sign "100% all american potatoes"?



backtozero
backtozero on Oct 07 '07
^^
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 07 '07
sorry I thought that was the last bump. I just think I need feedback from you guys. ^^
MsMae
MsMae on Oct 07 '07
i like the american potatoes cracked me up!
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 07 '07
Thanks MsMae, and thanks for bumping my older subs too. ^^
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 08 '07
L.T.
L.T. on Oct 08 '07
remove potatoes

keep all american

or freedom fries
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 09 '07
oki, I will



hmmm, is freedom fries a reference to something american? thanks. I know little about American pop culture.
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 09 '07
Is it about the US being a former French colony?
renfrue
   renfrue on Oct 09 '07
i think we got annoyed with france and stopped calling things "french" and used the title freedom instead



it may or may not have been when france created their own word for the internet cause they did not want to be americanized
renfrue
   renfrue on Oct 09 '07
I love the water, he's adorable with that stache and the blue stippling looks awesome
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 09 '07
ohhh! thanks renfrue!



So I guess, replacing 100% all american potatoes with Freedom Fries would be much better? Would you agree?
ahhreal
ahhreal on Oct 09 '07
yea and i couldnt tell for a while that bonjour was a word bubble, make that a little more obvious
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 09 '07
oki, surething^^
vapor2020
vapor2020 on Oct 09 '07
I really just don't get it.
backtozero
backtozero on Oct 09 '07
evian is mineral water from france. ^^
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christie lou
christie lou on Dec 20 '07
I love this (mainly because I speak french) but I think it's a smidgen unclear.
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Pinoy_Designs
Pinoy_Designs on Aug 11 '08
a pinoy was here.
xshrinkwrap
xshrinkwrap on Aug 11 '08
maybe remove "100% all-american potatoes" and put "american fries" or something like that, i don't know.

also, maybe evian could have a little french beret???
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