I hunger for any comments or tips. Thanks!

I'm not much of a comics fan, but this is pretty cool. I like his trunks :D Not much to improve here I think...good luck!

I would nix the text on the bottom and consider either not cutting the design so abruptly or using a different cut-out shape. The concept is great and aspects of the art are great.

This is pretty damn cool. Nice work! I'm not a big yellow T wearer, but art is amazing. Maybe try another font for the "Galactic" section. That seems a bit out of place with the 60's surf shop era. But overall, good to go!

Any thoughts on this Better Together I'd love to hear them. I really want to add some halftones and a vintage texture like you have. If you can offer any tips, tutorials, I would be greatly appreciative! Good luck.

i'd say it's ready.. the artwork is soo good.

Love it.

Love it.

There is a font out there called Fantastifont that would fit really well in there for a word or two.

Also, I wish the shading on the Surfer was more fluidy, like some of the inking on Jack Kirby's takes, but I'm not sure how to describe that any better... more little lines flowing/joining the larger areas of dark...?

Musarter on Jan 20 '11
I would nix the text on the bottom and consider either not cutting the design so abruptly or using a different cut-out shape. The concept is great and aspects of the art are great.

Thanks for tip- but I'm not sure about how to improve on the cut-out shape. What exactly is disagreeable about it?

Also, bygrinstow, I got that font- it's perfect. Thanks. I'm a huge Kirby fan, and will re-double my efforts to emulate his awesome Surfer shading (a tall order!).

Awesome, love it. Submit

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I think it AWESOME!
really nice
I'm not sure if the bottom text is necessary.
To me, it's too disturbing.

Maybe you need to change the design shape.
This shape is kinda cool but maybe some splashes, drops would be nice :)

I like the tee color.

If you'll find some time...
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I like this.
The Galactus hand is a little strange though. It just seems kinda placed there to include him. Maybe play with using the galactus colours in the text/sign, then you include him without really including him.
I agree that it cuts pretty sharp...might work better as a colour halftone fade.
Nice work. Awesome idea. Just a few more finishing touches and i think you have an awesome submission on your hands.

YES!!!! This is great! SUBMIT!!!

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Why has this not been submitted yet?? It's awesome! I'm really diggin his trunks. And his calves.

Mine? Olive a Good Bath

I don't think this will get printed here due to copyright, but I would try TeeFury, RIPT or other various 24hr printing sites.

I played with surfer's shading, added a couple of strokes, changed some font, and a few other tweaks. Thanks for great feedback so far- please keep it coming.

I think the body looks MUCH better.

The head could be simplified. I think it would be mostly reflecting sky, anyway.

I forgot to mention I love the swirly stuff inside of the word cosmic.

I'm not sure you need the "Norrin's"...

Capitalize "boards"?

This will be the only surf shirt I'd own.

['Twenty If' is my fave Threadless shirt to wear. Gets plenty of smile-nods, too.]

Thanks! I've gotta keep the "Norrin's" since that's my nod to the fan boys who know the surfer's real name. I'll revisit the head. Thanks for great feedback this time and especially last time. (and I'm glad 20 if by robot is a hit!)

Thanks for all the great feedback, especially byringstow. Barring any major recommendations, I think it's ready to sub.

That's not ready to sub -- it's ready to wear!

Yeap, that's ready to submit and wear.


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nice, felt like the beach already. Submit it!

if you have the time, can you please comment on my Paramecium Design?