Hi there, just looking to see what you all think of my design and get some suggestions. Thanks for looking!

Awesome!

i would say alitte too much half tone other than that it's super

thanks!

Yeah you are completely right about the halftone!

slightly smaller so the negative space is even all around. Really cute

cool yeah I have a tendency to make designs too large. Thanks!

awesome design, make it smaller and it's perfect

sweet thanks!

thanks for all your comments! here is a version that is smaller on the shirt and has less halftone junk. Cheers!

I love it. I like the way the half-tones look in this one much better! Very freakin' cool.

i like the idea, that bottom monster looks fabulous, the middle guy needs work he just doesn't look as well developed, and i don't think you need halftones at all.

i really love the pattern & eyes on the bottom creature though, well done & good luck.

awesome thanks. I will work on the middle guy and try a version with no halftones. thanks for your input!

sure thing. if you have a second i have a design up in critiques as well, i could use some advice.

i agree that middle guy needs a bit of work. he looks like a hot dog. add some antenae or funkify the eyes. and i second that it probably doesn't need the halftone. good luck.

oh this size looks good. keep it up

Thanks for all your comments! I took out the halftones mostly and did some work on the middle monster. Again thanks for looking you have all been super helpful!

so much better! i love it! i'd still prefer no halftones as a door shadow, but otherwise, sub.

thanks! Subbed!

sorrry I missed this one, looking forward to scoring it :)

oh right on thankyou!

i prefer version 2

well this is ready now. Looks really good. Also it looks like it was so fun to do. Love the wood panneling. Let me know when its up for scoring

thanks so much! I will!

mealing the sock monkey ... that is perfect

its in the running!!!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/137066/Closet_Monsters

Ok I subbed the last version and got a lot of great comments, so I decided to re-work. what do you all think of this version and is it worth re-subbing? Thanks!

I love this, I was just saying how there wasn't enough purple on threadless and now...well, I love it.

oh wow. aawesome changes.

thanks!!!

cool ^^

this is really well done !

this is really well done !

sweet ok then I am subbin!
Thanks all

http://www.threadless.com/submission/138347/Closet_Creepers

its up!

thanks all!

voting now. 5

thanks kalien!

sure.