I think the stadium looks too flat. Actually I guess it's just a field, but giving it some walls or some other sense of depth might accentuate the "out of the park" feel. Also, the forced perspective doesn't seem quite natural, in that half the time I look at this I see a giant ball bouncing off a paddle rather than a small object flying out of a park.

Maybe you're right, I think I could add a few extra details, maybe some trees around the edges?

Improvement? Worse?

o shit, i was wondering y in V.1 u had the field shaped wierd, now V.2 tells me y. i like it a lot better. i dunno if or wut else u should add. dont wanna overcrowd the design. maybe a parking lot full of cars??? but like i said, that'll prob be too much.

What was weird about the field in 1 that reveals itself in 2? I'm confused!

the outline of the field b4 u started putting in the stadium.

fantastic. definitely submit
if you get a chance, give some feedback on mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/83367/Free_Kisses

Ha--love it. I would go with a blue shirt, something more of a universal baseball team color. Maybe that's just the Cubs fan in me talking. I wouldn't wear a green shirt to a game. But otherwise, love it!

Pls let me know any thoughts you have on this puppy here:
Better Together

Blue background, added some texturing to the concrete permiter because I didn't like it looking flat.

Love it!

im digging it! I do agree on the shading, other wise awesome work, deff submit worthy!


let me know what you think

http://www.threadless.com/critique/83126/Jurassic_Playground

I worked quite a bit on cleaning up the stadium and getting rid of some of the details. How does it look?

looks great. i personally think u can do w/o the ear.

I think you could be right actually...thanks!

yay?

Most defintly a yay!, i would submit this one, has the making of a great entry!

Most defintly a yay!, i would submit this one, has the making of a great entry!

and good luck!

The ear is still on your tee demo. Looking good.

Homerlicious... there seems to be a Simpson's revival going on.

Please take a gander at my design "Flying the Pig"

I had a great suggestion to add the duff blimp in, I think it adds a little bit extra fun to the design!

Oh, thanks everyone for good suggestions

o nice!q glad to see the ear removed!

Haha. Great changes, I like the blue shirt, no ear and the duff blimp. Submit!

If you get a chance, I'm looking for comments and votes (hopefully high!) on my design. It is my first design and it only has a few hours left. I would definitely appreciate any last minute positive comments.
Boot Camp

Duff Blimp is a 5$ addition. Great job.

I like the diff blimp too, but perhaps you could say in the submission that it is optional, as to avoid possible copyright.

good job.

my current work in progress.

The duff blimp is an excellent touch. Submit this :D

Score and comment mine if you have the time.

subbed, thanks! I made it so half the DUFF text is obscured on the blimp, but it can always be changed if need be