A tribute piece to dali and his greatness.

wow, this is sssooo cool.
I would say... work on the lines a little, but keep the roughness, 'cause that looks great. maybe some shadowing too. looks like your edges got a little cut off their too. this is so cool though!
check out mine if you get a chance.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/82302/Bunny_s_Shadow

I understand this is a sketch?!
Needs work and colour!


What do you think of mine?

OK... Seeing your works, it is a sketch. And a nice one!

Maybe you could help me- and tell me if it is possible to print in the way I coloured my drawing- with so many gradients... and what is there to be done...


Thanks!

I love the design but it could use a bit of shading.

Please take a look... (:

its all really cool needs to get cleaned up maybe some light shading and color wouldnt hurt

check out mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/82948/El_Ojo_Repetido

I too agree with the others. It is intensely epic. I would definitely wear it.

Please score my submission: Astromen

Linework almost complete...

I like where you're headed with it. The crescent on top might be too strong though it's something better gaged when the whole thing is complete.

Would appreciate comments on mine if you get a chance. - Thanks

Nice work so far