Awesome! I love Mario. Maybe just a little more work on the blood. Otherwise it's perfect.

Nice work!


What do you think of mine?

thanks! If you mean the red on the leaves I did not intend it as blood, I just colored the tips of the leaves red to make them look a bit more dangerous, but I can see how it can appear to be blood, maybe I need to work on how the green meets the red on the leaves?

If there was to be blood on anything, i think it should be on the spikes. But i dont think blood is needed here.
I agree that you shoul dplay with the red/green meeting on the leaves. Maybe make the red follow the veins and blend into the green from there.
Very cool design.
If you kept the wrench in marios hand it might look like hes got a chance of escaping this... but i think hes doomed either way.
Keep up the good work.

Yes, I thought the red on the leaves was blood. Maybe the transition betweent the two colors shuld be smoother? The only thing I don't like here is that the head of the plant appears to look like the Amanits Muscaria mushroom. Belive me when I say that mushroom would never hurt anyone. Don't mind this last comment, the head is fine for this design, its just that I'm farmiliar with mushrooms ;D. I see that you submited this twice before, I really hope it gets printed this time. It's better than the previous versions. Check out mine if you have the time.

Alright, thanks for the input!

Haha hope someone who is not familiar with mushrooms sees it as the plant it's supposed to be ;P

This definitely has potential. However, I would like a different green hue on the plant. Very very nice, really. Good luck! Hope this get printed.

Care to critique mine?

A few changes

what about the leaves now?

Looks great. I think in addition to the 2 colored shirts you already have black would also be great.

Please come vote for my submission: Astromen

Great illustration! Looks ready for a submission!

alright thanks guys, and does the leaves look better than the previous version?

bump

Hah! Please submit it so I can give it a $5 and buy it!! Awesome idea!! Really loved it!

Would you mind sending a quick critique back my way as well? I'd appreciate it!!

I believe I can FLY

I love this man! I can't think of anything i'd change. SUBMIT!


Check out my latest design!

Please submit! This is way cool! I would change nothing!
Also if you have a moment, Please take the time to score and comment on my submission Always Out of Reach! Thanks :)

very good! please see my design!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/82875/let_s_work

Can't really decide what tee-color to put it on, what do you think?

I like the darker shirts more but they don't work well with the bright flagging..

Aside from this the purple and the dark blue versions are awesome.

on green!

looks best on green. Although this is the more better ones i've seen but what's with this random influx of mario designs ONLY referencing pipes and piranha plants?

I like the dark blue and dark green shirts personally. I might try to make the bathroom look a little more destroyed. Cracks in the tiles and stuff like that and more water splashed around. It's an awesome shirt as is though.

Take a look at mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/81126/Cluster_Duck

Fun!

I'm also guilty of working on a Mario/Pirana design (sorry CBibbo1025)... different concept though: "Cheating for a High Score!"

Looks catchy on dark color shirt...

Critique my "Zip Stripes"

Critique my "Twinkle Twinkle Little Stars"

thanks, purple or green, or both, seems like good choices :)

still have not gotten around to submitting this, but I'll do it soon. I'm just bumping it up in case somebody got some advise :) maybe I need to change the colors a bit if I'm gonna put it on pruple or green?

YEAH, looks great!

btw, I could need some feedback on my design: Penguins need love, too!

Yeah I am also with the darker colors!! Although the light blue looks awesome as well!! Please go submit it so it can get printed already! Can't wait to have this shirt!!


Would you mind giving me a quick score on my design? I'd appreciate it! If you already did, thanks a lot!!!

Score "I believe I can FLY"

Like it! I'd say the Dark blue or the green one! Submit

If you have time, give me some feedback :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/83816/They_started_it

Different from the other comments but the purple for me and my partner, there arnt many purple shirts kicking around and this stands out beautifully on one. awsome design. if you have the time, whats your opinion? Those Little Piggys

Come on, man! Submit the purple version :-)!

purple!

I dont think the leak adds anything to the design, like the running water and spanner
I think its because its a cluttered design already, simple works man :P

I'd say the green looks best and the dark blue is my next favourite

also it could be coming through a toilet? that might work better, it looks too 'industrial' on the blue tiles looks too sterile and hostile
lTake a look at mine, if you have the time :)