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v1 Tired Eyes, 1017 days ago, click to expand

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ir0cko
on Feb 28 '07

Version 1 - 1017 days ago

Version 2 - 1012 days ago

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

This is for you, Phil & Nate. Peer pressure. I hate you guys.

pilihp on Feb 28 '07

see... it wasn't so bad or scary.

looks great buddy.

sonmi on Feb 28 '07

i like it!!!!!!!

Mr. Gomez on Feb 28 '07

maybe some color?

littlem on Feb 28 '07

hotness!

tiphaine on Feb 28 '07

mmm, pretty!

ladykat on Feb 28 '07

I really like this! I think some of the lines need a little cleaning up, but that's it!

squeegebeckenheim on Feb 28 '07

it looks great!

nice and balanced on the shirt.

it looks kind of like a drawing on a chalkboard cause of the colors.

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

thanks you guys. i was very nervous about putting this up, and i've been tense ever since i pressed submit.

i'm definitely working on coloring it and i will be fixing up lines! :)

deathcabfortom on Feb 28 '07

LAOME. loll. good job randy. been working long and hard on this eh?

thats what she said.

Lucretia Mott on Feb 28 '07

Vagina?

Lucretia Mott on Feb 28 '07

x 54?

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

excuse me, tom?

Shebly on Feb 28 '07

:)
It makes me want to touch the screen. Yes, I want to touch the 54 vaginas; pretty.

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

the pen tool is my new enemy!

adam antium on Feb 28 '07

i like it man!
pen tool is my nemesis

realslimnatey on Feb 28 '07

i still say you should bust out the blob version for is0nmicko to see! that one kicks arse as well

clean the lines up just a tad dude, this looks sweet on a shirt, and on james blunt and ryan seacrest

fc gravy on Feb 28 '07

this is pretty good! i'm not sure if you need to put more colours because the one colour looks good on the tee but that's up to you. i think it would be cooler though if there were a few more patterns/textures if just one colour.

esthergrondahl on Feb 28 '07

I actually thought it looked like a few vaginas next to each other. Maybe it's just the mood I'm in. Can you define the "eyes" more?

realslimnatey on Feb 28 '07

i think i like the way you think esther

Frank Vice on Feb 28 '07

submit that shit son

esthergrondahl on Feb 28 '07

bwaaaahahahahahahaha. That's funny.

MeLa de Gypsie on Feb 28 '07

asphalt and pink ftw!!!!

I'm glad you're finally submitting something.

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

what colors would you guys like to see on this?

realslimnatey on Feb 28 '07

Roy G Biv

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

F U? :)

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

LIGHT BLUE ON DAKOTA SLATE

littlem on Feb 28 '07

that colour is hot!

ir0cko on Feb 28 '07

yes, it is :D

ir0cko on Mar 01 '07

bumpity bump

realslimnatey on Mar 01 '07

submit it

ir0cko on Mar 01 '07

i think i will

tiphaine on Mar 01 '07

i'm with mela, asphalt and pink pls! and yes, submit, submit!

ir0cko on Mar 01 '07

soon! i'm trying to get the lines cleaned up by learning the pen tool.

realslimnatey on Mar 01 '07

ask your designer friends

canadianbeaver on Mar 01 '07

very lovely and all but can you explain to this knumbskull what I am looking at? It appears to be a bird with some heavy eyes and feathers - great forms but I am having trubble

ir0cko on Mar 01 '07

just a bunch of tired eyes :P
(that supposedly look like vaginas to a couple people)

J-Ray on Mar 02 '07

supposedly? lol... you couldn't make it more vaginal if you tried!

AliceChew on Mar 02 '07

I never even thought of vaginas until I read the comments. Loved it until then! Damn it now I can't say I'd buy it. I still really like it though. I really like the single colours, they're very striking on the dark shirts.

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

you should still love it! if you love it, it'll make me feel better cause this is my very first time trying to make something! haha

herky on Mar 02 '07

great stuff, love the teal and dark gray combo. nice line work.

AliceChew on Mar 02 '07

LOL fine I still love it, but I couldn't wear it knowing that people will only quickly glance at it and think I'm wearing a bunch of vaginas. Having said that I'll still 5 it when you sub, don't worry!

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

hahahaha. thanks guys!

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

to those that said it needs work..what would you guys like to see?

stuff on the bird? lose the freckles?

i'm still trying to clean the lines up. the pen tool is becoming my friend.

J-Ray on Mar 02 '07

fucking critiques suck

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

oh. i meant, same questions as my last post!

angelito on Mar 02 '07

randyyyyyyyy where's the colour version Nate showed me?!?! I luffed that version even morerer.....

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

which one?

angelito on Mar 02 '07

it was all these pastel colours and really funky, nate showed it to me about 5 days ago?

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

ohh. that was a version hanna did. she was bored and decided to color. :)

angelito on Mar 02 '07

i liked it lots :) can you do something similar?

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

this one, right?

that's hanna's version

angelito on Mar 02 '07

YES!!!!

ir0cko on Mar 02 '07

i'll try working on one like that

ir0cko on Mar 03 '07

la de da la de da

minxorjinx on Mar 03 '07

adrienne has filled me in. ;)

angelito on Mar 03 '07

well??!?!?!

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

it's right here

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

I think you could "fill in" those shapes

lol

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

you're nasty

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

you don't think it could use more color?

sonmi on Mar 05 '07

i'm fond of how this looks, still

i don't know how well it'll do in scoring, but it's got my $55555

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

i know it'll do bad in scoring, but i told myself i'm going to submit something this year as a "resolution"

i'm doing this for nate! yes! i'll do it for him!

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

actually i think you should submit it like this... i'm gunna change my vote

sonmi on Mar 05 '07

do it for the little guy!

pilihp on Mar 05 '07

sub it already!

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

i got rid of the double lines on the bird and added zig-zags on its chest. i'll post it when i'm done trying to clean it up. :)

oh, and the bird's chest got rounder

angelito on Mar 05 '07

sub this fucker already, randmi!

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

did nate tell you to yell at me again?

v2 Tired Eyes, current version

Work in progress by:

ir0cko
on Mar 05 '07

Version 1 - 1017 days ago

Version 2 - 1012 days ago

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

are the lines clean enough?

the bird's chest is rounder with some zig zags. i also got rid of all the double lines except for the wing. yeahhhhh...

deathcabfortom on Mar 05 '07

subby it up.

squeegebeckenheim on Mar 05 '07

better!

tinahyena on Mar 05 '07

it looks great randy...are you going to submit it now?

hannabear on Mar 05 '07

submit the colors!

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

which colors?

lsmc88 on Mar 05 '07

DO IT

lsmc88 on Mar 05 '07

all three are good

tiphaine on Mar 05 '07

i preferred it without the zigzags, but it's good with them too. i say submit! (of course, i said that last time.)

ir0cko on Mar 05 '07

i guess i should give an option with the zig zags

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

UR 2 GOOD 4 ME

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

whisper in water on Mar 06 '07

I like the green one the best!

391 days later

Pavatron on Apr 01 '08

I like it Critique mine

169 days later

wearing cheap on Sep 18 '08

needs work, its simply crude

stezi on Sep 18 '08

i like light blue on dark grey

the birds!

229 days later

comarcks on May 05 '09

nice artwork..

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